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“Love along the way”
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“Love along the way” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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If my world should end tomorrow, and the book of days be closed… If I had but one last chance to look upon the paths I chose… I’d look back upon my journey, see my life within it play… I would know as I know now… I had great love along the way… As a child, I felt the passion, living by the changing sea… Where I learned to love all nature… It became a part of me… Running free with young emotion, love unbridled…filled with youth… Innocent and undiscovered… Where the beauty lies in truth… I saw love as a young mother, holding babies on her arm… In the eyes that looked up to me, love was there in tender charm… I knew love was still inside me, on the day life fell apart… Only love could cause the breaking, of that young wife’s aching heart… Many years I wandered, lonely… Tried it all, and walked away… Left some love undone behind me, knowing I could never stay… Now I see that love was with me, though I tried to shut it out… And the lovers I remember, taught me what love’s all about… Then without my even knowing, true love paid my life a call… Opened up my heart’s closed windows, held me up, so I could fall… Love was there on that bright morning, when two lives became as one… And it tied our hearts together… Twenty years, and we’re not done! So, I cherish all my journeys, and I keep the lessons learned… And I hold onto the special love, for which I always yearned… If I had but one tomorrow, spent on looking back this way… I would smile, for I see now, I had great love along the way… Write on! -<--<--{(@ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 01-15-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunny1...what are you doing standing in my shoes?...give 'em back, my toes are cold... seriously, this is wonderful...and speaks well for many women! Thank you! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'So, I cherish all my journeys, and I keep the lessons learned… And I hold onto the special love, for which I always yearned… If I had but one tomorrow, spent on looking back this way… I would smile, for I see now, I had great love along the way…' Beautiful reflections, sunny! I love this one! sp  I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey friend, I love this, sounds very uplifting, and positive. I'm glad if you are feeling that way  Luv, S |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Sunny, a trail of lessons, life, and love...great work! Robert Joseph |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
Sunny, what an insightful and expressive poem! How well you reflect life and honor your love. A classic. Thanks, Stan |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sunshine ~~~ Yes.....this is for us girls, and as I know many of us can relate to some of it, or all of it......and that is sharing, right ladies?  ~~~ snowpants ~~~ I am so glad that you stopped by and enjoyed this poem today, my friend!! It's good to make you smile!! ~~~ Sandra ~~~ Oh, best friend.....I thank you, and know that you will understand this as you understand me!! ~~~ R. J. ~~~ Yes.....it has been a long trail, and like Jerry Garcia once said, 'a strange trip', but looking back has given me countless hours of love and laughter!! Thanks!! ~~~ Stan ~~~ Thank you so much!! It's always good to sit back and reflect and more so when it's done with my friends here at Passions!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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