Open Poetry #12 |
Mr. Yesterday |
Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Hello Mr. Yesterday Tomorrows coming soon You need to put the past away Stop sifting through the runes Let the ash fall in between Your fingers clenched so tight You cannot change the things you’ve seen You cannot make them right Hello Mr. Yesterday It’s all behind you now You do not have to live that way And I can show you how Open up your eyes and see The world isn’t so gray Its whatever you want to be Tomorrow starts today |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm printing this one, m'friend... needed to read this today...great message! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Kevin--Wonderful write. And love the last line. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Enjoyed as always! Keep writing! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved it kevin..always nice when you drop my passions..take care hon ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ Absolutely a wonderfully written piece. 'Tomorrow starts today' Indeed, indeed ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
glad to be on your paper seren pminister and marge tommorow does start today victoria, i love having a place to drop into with people like you to share with master you know im your biggest fan, what up kid |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this Kevin...James |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
*the diamond in the rough* a very shining piece. it's nice to see a ray of light. i dig it. all the way. You don't hear much about guys who take their shot and miss... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kevin~ Way ta go so true my friend...great write ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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