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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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I will a l w a y s LObelieveVE e v e n if love doesn't MbelieveE ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 02-07-2001).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
god that's beautiful!!!!!.... really..... me too.... |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Clever you!  I love these!To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
WOW......loved this !!! helen |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sir, you are indeed clever! Very hopeful with an excellent format! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nicely done, Sven. I guess all those Boggle words are rubbing off on ya!!!  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
your words are so strong....this has such beauty in it....WOW....~sigh~ Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Enjoy as always. You can take words and twist them anyway you want and they always come out perfect. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven dear heart, this is S T U N N I N G Utterly truly wonderful and soooooooo creative too. I love this because it is perfect of course it is you wrote it Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
somewhere, someplace, someone is ... clapping .... well done Sven! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
gotta ditto all of the above on this one, it is stunning, in form and content |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you everyone. . . doreen, thank you. . . I know. . . dreamkeeper, I'm glad that you liked. . . helen, you too!! Melissa, thank you. . . I figure it works both ways you know?? LW, I guess they are. . . but I'm not as inventive as they are with words. . . thanks. . . Greeneyes, thank you so much. . . inot2B, I wouldn't say that they always come out perfect. . . but thank you. . . Marsha love, you're going to give me a big head if you keep saying things like that. . . . . . thank you so much. . . Sunshine, I hope so. . . thank you. . . jb, thank you for reading . . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This is spectacular PoetFriend... You have me smiling as this gem... |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sven, short, to the point and so true. Creative too. Loved it. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you have me aching to try out an experimental poem or two...thats how good you are...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love how you bring your poems to life huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're getting more and more creative all the time Sven...this is another great one! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
John- Gosh I haven't responded to this one yet! My, I'm slipping...what's happening to me lol  This is just so beautiful sweets...love the presentation, format, everything! love it love love it...did i say i loved this? lol take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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