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Pippers Pack the Poet Place
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Pippers Pack the Poet Place |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Pippers pack the poet place Producing pride and printed praise Posting poems of passion’s prize Perfecting poet’s paradise Prolific pippers proudly parade Plentiful posts on passion’s page Presuming pen permits a pose Of pipping poetry or prose Posted poems profusely race From page to page at panther’s pace Pretty poems proudly penned Pass pleasantly to forums end Pipping prods a poet’s pain From pen to puttering pouring plain For poets prefer to publicly prance In pitiful pools of post romance Prompting pity and poet prayers From passionate people, pipping players Pondering the poet’s plight Poignant, pleasant and polite Pippers prophetically propose Poetry replacing prose Placing Poe on pedestal With predator and pits appall Personally I prefer the prime The perfect poem , a paradigm Pentameter precisely placed A pendulum concisely paced Quipper, pipper, pipster, Poe, Pipping poems, a poetry pro Perceptively I proudly boast I’m just too sexy for this post Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...PERFECT! What an Ending! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
never seen so many p's lolol......great post  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
A pleasing palette.!~!!! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he that's just so delightful Elizabeth I really like it! You can never be too sexy for the post....I hope the you can still see the p letter on the key.....I loved it! Keep up the good work your writing is so enjoyable! ethome |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What can I say, This is what happens when you run out of material Thank you, pippers, for your indulgence Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Wonderful writing enjoyed the read very much. Love Sy |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Is your pinkie plum pooped? LOL This is great, Elizabeth... and I do love the ending! *G* |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
whatever provoked you to pen such perfectly precious alliteration which annunciates all alone from the tongue, so tremendously terrific!?!? please please pen some more prolific and passionate pieces with provide pleasure to the peruser! :P hehe..... (could you tell i liked it? *g) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Um. . . can I just say that I liked it?? LOL  --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Pleasingly perfect poem! |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Elizabeth, this is totally delightful! Something popped to mind..."You're a pipper, I'm a pipper..." but I can't remember how it goes (old Dr. Pepper commercial) ... Anyway, it's fun being a pipper, and being a passionate pipper even better! Thanks for this gem! Lary |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"wouldn'tja like to be a pipper, too?" *g... commercially speaking....  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Hehe, very clever! What a mouthful! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PLizabeth~ Pfuny ! Pfuny ! Pfuny ! Poet plants p's Poet picks p's pleasantly Please passionate poet, Paint ponderous paper p's Poof ! ~*Parge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful, Elizabeth!! How do you do it? I didn't know there were so many 'p' words in the dictionary!! Quite clever!! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Liz, I'm not supposed to laugh... Doctors orders, I could hurt myself before the 14th. Have you tried to read this aloud to anyone... it's the pips... LOL love, dale |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was great Man so many P's. Love it. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Too PiPping Sexy... For sure...  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Liz, Perfectly penned as always, loved it girl. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Now you try say that one quickly Loved it. ~Maria~ |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
POOF ! And here it comes 'round again .Wonderful piece from Potstown Pa. Thanks Liz! Doc |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my.....what an end.....hehehe.....loved it  Charisma |
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