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Fluffy Clouds.........Tanka
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Fluffy Clouds.........Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Fluffy Clouds Angels wings spreading covering serenity inside fluffy clouds gentle touch of innocence melting thoughts of heavens light Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ My ... do you ever live up to your charismatic name with this one ! Just beguiling. What a lovely, lovely Tanka. You are blessed with the gift for this style, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do not attempt Tanka because I would not compete with you, my friend...you do this with honor, and you do it very well... and someday, I have a story to share with you.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chrisma, Good one enjoyed. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A lovely tanka! I love the thought of angel wings cascading beauty over fluffy clouds  Take care, Melissa~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Charisma, Lovely vision. Beautifully done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Sunlit Soul Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 37Never Land |
Absolute beauty here! A well done write!  "Every man dies. Not every man lives." -Tim Robbins |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Anytime that I need a little serenity in my day, all I have to do is find one of your works and I know instantly I will find peace and beauty to dwell in. Lovely Tanka my friend. Your words are so rich in the imagery and natural beauty of God's gifts to us. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I can only echo the rest, Charisma...it is a beautiful form and you do it so well......... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautiful Charisma...loved it..such a pretty pic... ~V~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I've been above this scene often and it's always awesome. Great scene about which to write, nice choice of form. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
pretty and cute, like that school girl I had a crush on back when I was five |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge: thank you my dear friend for your always kind and wonderful responses. Karilea: I think that you would these style very good yourself as I know how you can weave words with magic.......and I'll look forward to that story my friend. Seymour: thank you I am glad that you enjoyed it. Melissa: Oh yes I do love that too... wonderful thought right.... Poeminister: thank you for the beautyful my friend Sunlit Soul: thank you for your kind comment, and Welcome at passions. Mark: And I am so glad that you really enjoy these simply forms from me, it is always good to know that people really enjoy them. thank you for your always wonderful comments my dear friend. Balladeer: thank you my dear friend Victoria: I am so glad that you loved it, thanks my friend VAS: yes I think it must be an awesome sight....you're blessed that you have the change to see them often. thank you for your wonderful reply. Eaglescorpion: thank you for your kind comment. and sometimes little words brought up some memories....just a simple touch of words. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
yes...a wonderful tanka and I agree ,,you are the star of this style poetry. Huggs, Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you Koko.....but I think these would be my last one, as I lost my selfconfidence totally thank you for you always nice reply Charisma |
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