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Valentine's Love |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Valentine’s Love in calm I sense the essence of the spirit that would watch over me I am undone in the serenity and the peace which equates in this, this soft and pure, sweet and sure essence undone for as if on angels wings, I am lifted into a song of pure sweet love and I question not that I should be here, enfolded within, nor do I question the why of it but revel therein, in laissez-faire I shed all wear on what is left of my life’s force by serene course this heart’s beat now beats by the coercion of what is most right in this, pure, sweet light…. of my Valentine’s love 02.08.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 02-08-2001).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sunshine, this is soo beautiful. This is gonna be the first Valentine's Day for me to "share" with someone special in such a long time, I'm really looking forward to it. Sounds like you are too. Well done...  Michael |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
"this heart’s beat now beats by the coercion of what is most right in this, pure, sweet light…. of my Valentine’s love" Perfectly expressed - I wish I'd penned it myself ~S~ |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
You have a beautifully gentle flow to your writing that I really enjoy reading. It doesn't shout. It's more quiet and reflective. Honest and deep. This is beautiful. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a sweet poem! I'm sure your hubby will love it! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart this is outstandingly beautiful. Of course I love it of course it's a keeper, you have always been good this is superb. ============================================by serene course this heart’s beat now beats by the coercion of what is most right in this, pure, sweet light…. of my Valentine’s love ======================================== utterly wonderful writing love Take care love as always Puck  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling here...oh, I'm so looking forward to Valentines day this year |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--This is like velvet slippers and a warm fire...warm and sweet...beautifully done! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and I question not that I should be here, enfolded within, nor do I question the why of it but revel therein, in laissez-faire I shed all wear on what is left of my life’s force by serene course this heart’s beat now beats by the coercion of what is most right in this, pure, sweet light…. of my Valentine’s love =============== did you speak french??? COOL very cool write here Sun... lovely and romantic ... love the whole essence of this one nothing cliche' here me dear Heaven bound on wings of love, there's so much that you can rise above. I surrender heart and soul, sacrificed to a higher goal. ~DepechMode~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Love this, Sunshine. Beautiful write. Poeminister "It is our business to go as we are impelled." ~ D.H. Lawrence |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A poem like this is what Valentine's Day is all about...this is beautiful, Sunshine... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I thank you all so very much.... |
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