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Always, Never Was
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Always, Never Was |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Always, Never Was The cotton like softness drifting towards clear swirling it's dances for eyes watching near A morning all whitened, pured for my thoughts another day's wakening, the heavens have wrought Deeper, and hurting, each knife twisted moan tired and dragging, hard heartened like stone Fear that one day, shall my epitaph read "Lies here, alone, yet never was freed." Reading of words here, insane some have said in jest, we're assured, yet sometimes it's read More than it's meaning, but that's what it's for to interpret for each, for minds to explore To "feel", to "think" to "commiserate" sometimes but today I am drifting in thought lost in find Wouldn't it be wonderful to drift soft in air like those snowflakes of cotton that land gently there With warm sunshine resting upon cold of white To then melt into oblivion, freed, worryless this night. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, everyone should feel the kind of freedom you described here, Wynter, beautiful. "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wynter, Sad but good writing, enjoyed the read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kathleen thank you again, yes I would like to be freed of all worries but I know that is an impossibility *s "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sy, sorry about the sad, it's my **moodswing** week..I am trying though, really I am *wink thank you *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I know I have moodweeks like that too, nice thoughts though, love the writing  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
enjoyed reading your wonderful write. well done my friend Charisma |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
jelly and charisma, thank you both for the kind words...it definitely was a beautiful view out the window...huggsss ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Fear that one day, shall my epitaph read "Lies here, alone, yet never was freed." ********************************************** Lots of good lines in this one, but I keep coming back to these. That's a pretty scary thought. I suppose in a way we are never really free of people who once walked beside us. I've been in a mood swing week myself, so maybe feel this a bit more than usual. Hope you feel better soon. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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