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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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We meet within a shady Grove of pecan trees Their bold branches sway in Sun setting - shadows Soft rays break through The leaves to dance upon Us below "Shall we dance I ask"? "Did you bring music? you ask" " We are here among nature We have our symphony, We have each other" "And what song you ask?" A melody of how life Might have Been You take my hands, Our fingers linked, you caress Them softly With your lips, And brush the hair away From my face And for a moment my emotions, by No fault of my own change, As you know what I am feeling, What you are feeling I tremble in your arms, I try hard to hold The tears I feel Staining my cheeks And your shirt My heart breaks for the truth Of this, I see in your eyes A longing that is out of Reach for now You kiss my cheek with whispers "Darling’ I love you" This, our moment, is for now As the sun fades We dance *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is perfect just beautiful. . . I love everything about it. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Oh, I like this, but it is a little steamy for an old lady. (blushing) Don't tell, but I really liked this. ME |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now that is a dance that is worth wrapping your arms around.......not to mention your heart. Beautiful my poet friend but of course coming from you that was a given coming in to read it. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
i found myself entranced in this, as though spellbound...such a beautiful write. you pen your emotions quite wonderfully in this! it's apparent this one came straight from the heart!! take care ~amy~ "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Greeneyes, mesmerising and entrancing write write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahhhh yes ... lovely things can rise up from southern breezes  this is beautiful GE ... written like a whispered entry in a secret diary... very nice indeed. love the title take care jm Tomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But in you I've found a love so strong The sun and the moon look on in jealousy ~VH~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
If every couple danced more...ahhh thank you Green Eyes "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Beautiful the dance among magnolia scent Romantic thoughts waft ... Enjoyed the softness of it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ohhhhh...thank you one and all....I do not get to spend the time here that I'd like to....it really means much to me that there is a poet society that we can all turn to for reading and enjoying words.....I am grateful for all that read....Thank you much...Be well all...  Greeneyes~ *** |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous and refreshing, sweet friend, may you always dance with your love under the stars and in the sunshine and feel the breeze of the southland bring you together! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfect! |
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