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Sven
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0 posted 2001-02-04 01:59 PM


(light)            happiness
                    love
                    joy
                    laughing
                    smiling
(medium)       contentment
                    frowning
                    crying
                    sad
                    hate
(dark)            depression

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.



[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 02-04-2001).]

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Victoria
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1 posted 2001-02-04 02:43 PM


nicely dont sven..and i love the verse too at the bottom..
that is so true..

                             ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Marsha
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2 posted 2001-02-04 02:56 PM


Sven dear heart, this is excellant

shades of Sven

truth
honesty
hope         bright
integrity    
trust

faith
charity
friendship    shine
love
honour

The colours of your life run true and deep
This really is excellant love utterly perfect.
And yes I love it, most definitely a keeper
Thank you for this treasure
Take care love as always
                    Mushy
                      



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Celeste
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3 posted 2001-02-04 03:15 PM


I shall always love the light and cry in the dark.   Always thankful for the light, it at least gets us through the dark.  And you sparkle in the light.   *gentle smile*

To capture and live a moment is truly living


Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-02-04 03:31 PM


Sven, this is nice....and Marsha, when you come back into read the responses [because I know you do...] you need to post your response as an original...
Sven
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5 posted 2001-02-05 01:13 PM


Victoria. . .thank you my friend. . .  

Marsha. . . you embarass me love with your reply. . . it's wonderful. . . thank you so much. . .  

dreamkeeper. . . it's hard to shine in the dark. . . but I'm not the only one. . . thank you. . .  

Sunshine. . . thank you. . .and a good suggestion to Marsha. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

StumperDaBumper
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6 posted 2001-02-09 08:22 PM


Bumpintine
Bumpintine
Won't a bump
be mighty fine
Another trip
around the forum
cause I think
it's awful boring
without a little
bump or two
Here's one from me
just for you!

Happy Bumpintine!


Are we having fun yet?

Marsha
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7 posted 2001-02-10 07:19 AM


Sven dear heart this is a bump from me, why is this stuck on page 2? Well, no matter it's going back to the beginning.
Love this, and you know I really do.
I could USE Beverley for this couldn't I
            
Rename here Beverley Bump up? No I'll come up with something, see if I don't!
                love it
                   Mushy
                    or Puck  
                    
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Beverley
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8 posted 2001-02-10 01:00 PM


Sven dear heart, this is the perfect use for Bev de Bump, to bump them so they can get the best of chances. Because everyone should have a chance to read it and sometime sthese pages move too fast.

You know I love it
                bump from Bev de Bump
                 love as always
                  Bubbles
                      


And while thy willing soul transpires
At every pore with instant fire

Andrew Marvell 1621-1678


[This message has been edited by Beverley (edited 02-10-2001).]

vandana
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9 posted 2001-03-13 05:40 PM


enjoy it
doreen peri
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10 posted 2001-03-13 05:45 PM


well, my friend, that's quite an array of emotions strung down the page in a percussive, yet gentle sweep, accompanied by instructions for reading...

open up the mic! speak to me.......

say it soft, say it loud, speak it from the heart.....

jellybeans
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11 posted 2001-03-13 05:45 PM


well blue must be my favorite color...you got it perfect
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