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Rattle of The Witch's Dance
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Rattle of The Witch's Dance |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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A simple coal left unaware a rush of wind to beware defiant now, I lift my chin, breath of fire, dragon's grin. Rattle of the witch's dance, greet this moon upon the wax-- Hecate she will dance in me, I cast the bones, I set me free... Temperence may now be damned-- slash and burn upon the land nothing now to understand sparking flame of glory's hand Guardians, I call on thee, whispered cries eternity, escape my soul, love's reprimand, may this plea be as command-- my will, thine will-- So mote it be. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Rattle of the witch's dance, greet this moon upon the wax-- Hecate she will dance in me, I cast the bones, I set me free..." What a bewitching piece. I love it! Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
serenity, you've reached new dimensions with this write. Excellently penned. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Serenity love, this is as magical and as spellbinding as I have ever seen. Utterly wonderful love absolutely wonderful Excellant work Take care love Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hecate she will dance in me, I cast the bones, I set me free... Temperence may now be damned-- slash and burn upon the land nothing now to understand sparking flame of glory's hand Guardians, I call on thee, whispered cries eternity, escape my soul, love's reprimand, may this plea be as command-- my will, thine will-- So mote it be. ================== "ooooooo girlfriend ... I'm scared of you" can I dance wit-ch ya too huh huh you know Im diggin this one right ... uh huh very very cool write me twin ... love when ya lay down the rhymes and damn the temperance the cadence in this dances right along with ya my candle dancing queen and its way cool ... so is the poet  meTomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But in you I've found a love so strong The sun and the moon look on in jealousy ~VH~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent. . . I love the feel of this one serenity. . . it's like being there. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I want YOU on my side!!! Love the 'chant' of this one. |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Are you sure it's a rattle, dear? It seems more of a quick wind, sharp but smooth. The only rattle comes from those she distrubs with her motion. But I feel the brush, and it's cool now, cool and good... but the warmth is hidden in the trees. Peace, sweet witch... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Perfect rhyme and clever use of words, I could envision every sentence, I "felt" this chant! Take care, Melissa~ |
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