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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-02-04 01:01 AM

Emeraldic Eyes

Erotic in gleam
Emeraldic eyes evoke
me out of my mind

Poeminister

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-04-2001).]

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

1 posted 2001-02-04 01:21 AM

I really enjoyed this.

snow

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-02-04 01:58 AM

Well done senyru. Vivid.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2001-02-04 02:24 AM

beautiful! really enjoyed this.
wish i had just a tenth of your
talent when doing something like a
senryu...wonderful write!

take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten
the words."

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2001-02-04 04:22 AM

Theres just something about the eyes huh? Lovely Poeminister very lovely

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-02-04 09:29 AM

oh my..do I taste some heat here...loved it.

Charisma

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-02-04 10:47 AM

Now, you know I love this, right?

SEA

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-02-04 03:10 PM

Wow! Now this is passionate and so beautiful! Well you know what they say: eyes are the window to a person's soul. You expressed this so uniquely and powerfully! I really do love this senryu

And hey, I have emerald bluish eyes

Take care,
Melissa~

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 02-04-2001).]

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

8 posted 2001-02-04 03:12 PM

*smiling* Oh wow!!!!!!!!! Loved it!

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

9 posted 2001-02-04 06:05 PM

Snow--
   Thank you for peeking in and commenting
   on this.  Glad you enjoyed it.
VAS--
   Thank you for the vivid.

Aimster--
Glad you liked this one. Thanks for your
comments.

Paula--
Thank you for reading
Charisma--
It tastes good doesn't it.

Thanks.
SEA --
Thank you.

Melissa Honeybee--
Thanks for the Wow and beautiful.
Dreamkeeper--
thanks for stopping by and commenting.

take care,
Poeminister

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