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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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the sun shone through the window i s i n u n d n d o o window and IN MY you ARMS awoke is there a better way to start the day?? oh yes!! Breakfast in Bed. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I like the last line! This is cute.  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I can think of nothing finer than to start the day in the arms of the one you love, closely followed by a DOUBLE breakfast in bed!! This was sweet Sven  Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
AD dear heart, this is utterly utterly wonderful. I love this one absolutely adore it. And it's creative too. Oh it's just WOW Excellant, and yes that includes breakfast in bed, no sugar in my tea please  I only drink coffee at work, Ace piece from you love Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*lol*....love the art, but don't love the breakfast in bed....oh no...that's not a feast for me.....loved and enjoyed reading these lovely write Charisma |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Wow, Sven...... You have to be the site's format-master!! This is really something, great poem, great visual effect!! ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And I do think I saw the sun wink at that sight...{~,^} |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is just too sweet! Very creative..I loved it! |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, If only everyday could be like that! Very sweet.. Love, Elise |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Sven, this is very creative. And what a nice thought. Sandra Dream as if you'll live forever; Live as if you'll die today. — James Dean |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you're outdoing yourself, sven........... that window illustration is really cool...... breakfast in bed, you say? hmmm.... now, that's thinking the way a man should think.... nicely done, poet |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
now my imagination is on overdrive haa..creative svennie..ha. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, only breakfast in bed would make a time with you more perfect than this poem write on in song Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, I compliment you on this creative format in this poem... It's sooooooooooo cool  Enjoyed the read PoetFriend ~coco~ You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Excellent. Me Likes Poeminister |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this rocked in both format and message. as always you never cease to amaze me with your endless talent! loved it! take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
no better way I can think of! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow. . . thank you all. . . Elizabeth. . . thank you. . . I thought that it was perfect too!! Isis. . . neither can I my friend. . . especially with someone you love. . . Bubbles love. . . no sugar? Ok. . and what kind of tea? Earl Grey?? Thank you so much. . . Charisma. . . no breakfast in bed for you??  Don't like crumbs in bed eh?? LOL. . . thank you my friend. . . Sunny. . . well. . . I wouldn't go that far. . . but I do try. . .thank you so much. . . Sunshine. . . I believe that you did. . . Tennessee Angel. . . thank you for reading!! Elise. . . not everyday. . . but most days!! Thank you my friend. . . Sandra. . .thank you. . . isn't it though?? *sigh*. . . doreen. . . glad that you like. . . and, I've always thought this way. . .now then. . . may I take your order??  Victoria. . . oh no!!!  Is that a good thing?? LOL . . .thank you. . . Kethry. . .  . . . well. . . now you got me so flustered, I don't know what to say. . . thank you!Coco. . . thank you my friend. . . and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. . . Poeminister. . . glad that you like!! Amy. . .wow. . . thanks!!! You're pretty rockin' yourself!! Kathleen. . .I see we agree. . . good!!. . .LOL. . . --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SVEN~...  what a perfect way to have breakfast in bed....hummmm... love this...be well kind friend... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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