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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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He took me With a fierceness…………………..that left me speechless Raging passion unable to tame………………I heard him calling, calling out my name Almost a desperate need…………………voice harsh with greed He took me But he gave so much……………………..waves of pleasure in his touch Heat pouring from fingertips…………………wicked kisses from his lips Taken quickly to heaven up high……………….now we lay together contented in sigh (yes............he took me) ~SEA~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA-- Sounds like bliss. Love it. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-03-2001).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
SEA...and YOU have just taken ME....to beautiful thoughts !!  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nice visuals SEA...hmmm. jwesley |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - when I read this I felt the many passions that you have written about. I loved this writing of yours. BC |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
hmmmmm better than choclate too! enjoyed this sensual delight.... thanks!!! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you've taken me, too |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
mmm mmm mmm desired and inspired ... you know Im loving this one... format and same line rhyme ... and the imagery aint half bad either hehevery cool Sea-girlie ... love seeing ya playing with poetry(and your muse)  later-taken-gator jm Tomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But in you I've found a love so strong The sun and the moon look on in jealousy ~VH~ |
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finetwine New Member
since 2001-02-03
Posts 1 |
That was a real nice piece...I liked it... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sea...mmmm mmmmm girl to be taken like this...wow...and I supposed you expect me to SLEEP tonight? |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
I really don't know how to describe this without using the word power. Nothing shocking, but this beating in my chest and up through my shoulders and throat... He took me But he gave so much This transition began the light explosion, and now I can't seem to shake it. Thanks. ~Beth |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! Great work here, I love it. " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Whew...excellently penned, SEA! You've definitely given us some great imagery here! Love it! I really love the style too! sp  ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 02-04-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whew.... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this should happen to every woman! wow! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it.....oh my....what a stunning ride....oops...write. enjoyed it a lot Charisma |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PM~ thank you for the "bliss" and the love it Balladeer~ thank you! JWesley~ glad you could see.......... BC~ that's very nice, thank you Koko~chocolate is pretty darn good, but yea, I thought it was better too DP~ glad you liked this Janet~you actually inspire me to play with poetry........you use so many different styles and always present your poems so beautifully, I'm happy you liked this! Finetwine~ thank you Paula~ just have sweet dreams............ Elizabeth C~wow, loved your reply, thank you Eagle One~thanks! SP~ thank you very much Sunshine~ ahem............. Kathleen~ I definately agree!! Charisma~ So glad you enjoyed the ride....I mean write ~SEA |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I love the way you wrote this. We are able to get the picture completly without out needless details. I will be looking for more of your poetry. |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
Speechless......definitely. This is great!!!!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And the thunder rolls through the soul. What a treat to read from you. Such power and vigor in this little piece of yours. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sea~...Woohooooo what a read this sunday afternoon....  I enjoyed your words much... be well...Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Sea, Hot stuff; too hot for a Sunday in the UK! Cheers! Jon |
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