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DAy Dreamed Reandevoux
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DAy Dreamed Reandevoux |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
Written June 1st 2000 Leave a rose on my pillow, place a note beside the phone. Race ahead to the willow, to the blanket- wait alone. I see the rose and test it's scent. I read the note with a smile. I follow the trail where you went, knowin' we'll be there awhile. You kiss my lips and closely snuggle... Lay me back with a gentle shove. You bend your head, my neck you nuzzle... as we get lost inside our love. (written during a Psych class...missin' my honey. i know i didn't spell reandevoux right..sorry.) "Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!" |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Wondeful and heartfelt words. I could picture eveything in my mind. great work. Keith every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Such a delicious daydream! Evokes a wishful fantasy, yet remains in realistic bounds. Nicely done! Lary |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'll bet everyone was wondering why you were smiling so much during class! LOL. This is great! |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
*blushes* well, i did get asked why i was smilin' so much..lol...but ya know... i worte some of my best poetry in psych class! coinkydink? i think not! "Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!" |
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