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Open Poetry #12

Night

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

0 posted 2001-02-05 03:51 PM

NIGHT

close your eyes my son
listen to the raindrops outside
- no, I don’t know how many they are

don’t worry, I’m here for you
and tomorrow the sun will shine again
and you will give me a new lesson
on hope and faith

sleep my love, the night is silent

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2001-02-05 04:41 PM

Awesome......love it.......helen

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-02-05 05:50 PM

I like this. It's comforting and soft. Lovely write.

Poeminister

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-05-2001).]

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-02-05 05:58 PM

comfort and warmth are felt here.

love it.

Charisma

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2001-02-05 08:50 PM

A calming and soothing write....thanks for sharing!

Nathan

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

5 posted 2001-02-06 10:40 AM

thank you all for your very nice comments! AP

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