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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-02-01 05:16 PM

A life journey

caught between want and get
life's puzzle pieces hard to fit
dreams to dreams is the flow
which direction shall it go
running in place at the gate
choosing sides to make our fate
ties of past and pain can you cut
how I feel truth deep in my gut
trying to see a future clear
seems so magnified through a tear
fling to a journey in life to take
to ease this pain that makes me ache
within this passage let me find
comfort in and peace of mind

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-02-01 08:44 PM

The message is wonderful and you know, I never rhymed anything with "gut" but you did it well!!!

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

2 posted 2001-02-02 07:28 AM

Life has so much to teach us.
nice
Rich

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-03-20 10:30 AM

I have to agree with rich---life does indeed have so much to teach us--or is that we stubbornly just have so much to learn? Over and over again until we finally "get it."

Nice write.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-03-20 01:08 PM

life has so much to teach us. . .

wonderful helen. . .

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Katherine Chandler
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

5 posted 2001-03-20 01:46 PM

Beauty in these words and such truth

"trying to see a future clear
seems so magnified through a tear.."

Wonderful thoughts to ponder. Great read.

Blessings..

Kate

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

6 posted 2001-03-21 11:45 PM

Wonderful write..I enjoyed this...thanks for sharing!

Nathan

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

7 posted 2001-03-21 11:54 PM

I agree with the others. So much truth here. and we keep trying till we get it right

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