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bcm
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 6

0 posted 2001-03-21 02:45 PM

Last night before I want to bed
thoughts of u ran frantically through my head.
Although I haven’t cried this way in years
on my pillow fell 5 little tears.
The 1st was for your smile I miss
and your soft lips I love to kiss.
The 2nd for your angel face
and all the loving thought of your gentle embrace.
The 3rd came to no surprise
as I thought of those sexy eye’s.
After the 4th came rolling
I thought of your body I should be holding.
The 5th came for one reason alone
I felt my love for you has not been fully shown.
Loosing you is my biggest fear
please don’t make me cry my 6th tear.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-03-21 02:50 PM

Welcome to Passions! I read what I like, and I like what you've written!

Please check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

2 posted 2001-03-21 03:35 PM

Welcome! This is very heart-felt......I enjoyed this very much!

SEA

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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3 posted 2001-03-21 03:35 PM

Welcome and dry your eyes, you have poetry to write!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2001-03-21 03:58 PM

Hope you don't have to cry the 6th tear either.
For i have no more tears left..

Welcome to Passions, and great start..

Bernie

A

a day keeps the world

'G

Bernie Slicker

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-03-21 05:17 PM

Perhaps the 5th will be the last, good luck and welcome. Well done!

Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

6 posted 2001-03-21 06:56 PM

I've read this poem several times before commenting. A very nice write. I pondered the 5th tear and the reason for it. You've expressed the emotions of love and sorrow beautifully. My compliments.

Welcome!

"When people show you who they are, believe them"

~Maya Angelou~

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-03-21 08:33 PM

I like the imagery that you've used here. . . excellent. . .

welcome. . . hope to see more from you. . .

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Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

8 posted 2001-03-21 08:37 PM

Wow, what a beautiful write! You write very well. Very creative.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

sans38
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since 2001-03-03

Posts 117
Westland, Michigan

9 posted 2001-03-21 08:57 PM

Ohhhh this was so wonderful! I loved it!!

Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

10 posted 2001-03-21 11:00 PM

bcm, dry those tears and let NO more fall. This is a great first poem and welcome to Passions. ME

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

11 posted 2001-03-21 11:24 PM

Wow, this is very good piece you've gave us...welcome to Passions!

Nathan

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

12 posted 2001-03-22 01:14 AM

The image of those tears...and the sixth just trembling there...wonderful...welcome to our world

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