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You smiled at me
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You smiled at me |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
You *smiled* at me I saw you from across the room and I knew I had to meet you soon you walked over and smiled at me from then on my days were of happiness and glee we started talking and after a while we knew each of us would walk that extra mile we wanted to be together, you and me you were the only one, as far as I could see after about a month we started going out we were always together,out and about it seemed as if this feeling of love would never end but it did and who knew the emotions it would send we broke up and went our seprate ways and now we don't have each other to fill our days I now hear what used to be our song and it kills me, its been too long you've moved on with your life and so have i I no longer go to bed and cry I have found someone new to like so my heart has now said to you-take a hike but maybe all the pain would of never happend you see, if you hadn't of walked over and smiled at me I have posted this in a few different places, I would just like to get different views on it.  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
finding love and to lose it than caused always heartache. you describe your feelins very well. Well done Charisma |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Angel Bee (I love your user name) You expressed this well, and boy do I ever relate! Sometimes all it takes is a wink or a glance or a smile for love to bloom as a rose, but, sometimes it ends as a thorn upon the heart... Take care, Melissa [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Ive read this in Teen Forum. As I believe I stated before, a look can lead to the great unknown  -Jeremy Raulinaitis "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
But you see? How can you not respond to a smile? As you clearly demonstrate, we all need that smile. You just never know where it will go. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
A.B.~ lovely expressions you have penned here. love is mystical...no one knows where it may lead. but even if it does cease and end, with every day that we spend in love, that to me is a beautiful miracle. and all that happens in our lives are like stepping stones, allowing us to go thru our lives stronger and happier. this has inspired a new poem in me. thanks so much! take care ~amy~ "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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