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Two Hearts |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Two hearts that share a love A love that is strong and true Time and distance though Has made these two hearts blue Battles seem to last forever The light of day just out of sight No matter how they try Darkness seems to take over light Little arguments Are now becoming the norm Then things go back to peaceful But hearts broken from the storm Two hearts once fused together Once all the answers they knew Now questions lay scattered around For these two hearts...me and you Did the wind suddenly blow different Or have the seasons just changed Why don't things make sense anymore Has love suddenly been rearranged This heart is feeling the push As though backed up against a wall Afraid this true love Is going to crumble and completely fall Eyes too tired to cry anymore I just let out a weary sigh Praying that these two hearts make it And love doesn't pass them by Amy M. Kennedy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read  |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Wonderfuly writen. Sad to hear that you're having troubles. Just remember not to let little things get in the way of the larger picture of your dreams. Take care. Keith W. Mullin every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
A poignant description of our struggles with love and life - you've given it such realism. We can only keep trying and hoping... This is a heart-tugger, very nicely done! Lary |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just remember to talk. . . talking is where it has to start. . . Hugs to you my friend. . . this is an excellent poem. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amy....a song, like any other, still needs to be sung.... well done.... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thank you all kindly for your special replies. as always you have touched my heart. i am back for a while and hope to catch up some. seems i have missed quite a lot of excellent work! take care all amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Amy-girl ... you write with your heart on high ... only you can know what is worth fighting for and what is too much of a cost ... sometimes fate has a bigger plan ... sometimes we have to simply let things play out ... and make the discoveries along the way ... in the end ... everything happens for a reason ... regardless of the outcome ... beautiful poetry kissed with sincerety take care sweetie love ya JM If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Amy, this is just so sad and lonely. Well expressed from the depths of your heart. Love could never pass a beautiful person like you by I hope that this soon shall pass and your bond with him will be solid once more! ~Hugs~Take care, Melissa |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Two hearts once fused together Once all the answers they knew Now questions lay scattered around For these two hearts...me and you Did the wind suddenly blow different Or have the seasons just changed Why don't things make sense anymore Has love suddenly been rearranged' Aim...not a wonderful situation, but you have penned it excellently, as usual, my friend. Love does work itself out, as much as we don't think so, or if the outcome is not what we expected...it knows what's best for us. Take care my friend...I will talk to ya soon! sp 'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing... |
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