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Sugar and Spice
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sugar and Spice My woman thought she could go down in porn star history if an exotic dancer she could be. She didn't see a need to clear it with me. Somehow I'd understand because it's her body not mine you see. Soon my friends were all saying "I do declare, wasn't that your lover I saw dancing naked up there?" When I watched my friends gawk and stare I realized it didn't feel so hot with her up there. She said, "You seem to be taking this pretty well." I said, "Not so, I'm as uncomfortable as hell." "Hon, I know I don't have much say but it seems to me not all dancers disrobe this way." "If it is your desire to dance nude perhaps you might consider a move." "I hear they need entertainers in Paris at the Moulin Rouge." "Sugar and spice it seems to me you're skating on thin ice." "Sugar and spice please be nice." Jameslee@January27,2001 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I dont blame you I wouldnt want YOU up there having all Passions ladies staring at you...This is a great turn around look at the world of strippers...and thier lovers We all have wings...some of us don't know why |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
What to say James...Thoroughly understand what you're saying and where you're coming from...kinda been there, done that...well written though... the best, my friend... jwesley |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You said it quite well!!!!Had one of my sons say he liked to go to those kind of joints to watch the dancers. But when he started to date one of them he decided he didn't care to watch others watch her. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This was a very hard experience for me...in my past now because I wanted no part of this...my feelings are each must decide for themselves the journey they partake of...and as for me if I can not share your journey someone else will and I will share mine with someone that has similar desires...James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Jimmy I loved the story and the way you expressed this....it's interesting, the imagery is wonderful and the poem is well writtten....brillliant work! Nathan |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Jimmy I loved the story and the way you expressed this....it's interesting, the imagery is wonderful and the poem is well writtten....brilliant work! Nathan |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ this is very sad.......I'm glad you aren't there any more........it would kill me to have the one I love acting that way......job or not......I think that stuff should be kept in the bedroom.  -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Nate and Sea for reading and responding.. Yes Sea that is definately bedroom stuff in my eyes...James |
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