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Communion (Nonsense Poetry...no xplanations provided)
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
Humpty, rumpty saddles flogging at the meat lushflesh oyster sweaty toilet seat "god mother your holiness tether tie me to your rosebud bosom deuteronomy and upchuck my spirit" second coming is near the god book says or lather seeds it from bullpit with lezbeauty unjustice for all something smells fishery in the winery bowel the youthcarest my tongue kneeling, icon circumcise my heart Amen |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
ain't it fun to play with words!!!?? great write.... i loved it!  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
He he...know what Russ, you have "WAY" too much time on your hands! This was awesome, just awesome! But...then you could be naturally bizarre, are you? He He ) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
reading this. . . I was abmazed by the floimages of this exoem. . . you've donell with it. . . subexcellent. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
*smiling and applauding* you sure have a different style....am enjoying your explorations |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
OK well...I'm confused but don't take it personally, I've killed a few more brain cells than I should've. Nonetheless, I enjoyed the difference of this so will bump you in appreciation. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
 Alas, I understood it! From such youthful education, rises memories tinged in a yellow flicker. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
(hehehehehehe)  |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
Dude! how cool! once, when some friends and i got "high," i kept thinking "is 'bloob' a word?" i like this one!...tom |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
*Grins!* You know I read this half with the fear I would understand it! LOL "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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Panne415 Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 104San Antonio |
JB- well this isn't your pantun - (chuckles) I loved this word play fun but i also got a message each time I read it but I'll be darned if I can express that message in words but the feeling was almost of sadness at the world the persona sees around him and a prayer to he doesn't know who ...best I can do -had no sleep in last 24 hrs - I had a problem with this line 'or lather seeds it from bullpit' is this part of the word play or it lather a typo for rather and/or is seeds(depending on my former) s/b sees - just curious. But I had great fun and loneliness (maybe uneasiness is the word) - reading it .. Panne will keep looking for ur pantun |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
My gracious, all kinds of truth with 'life events, conundrums' interwoven within. This is a work of art, I think. Ya know, I think there may be much more here than you know and than I can see. |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
Everyone...I can't thank you enough for your readings and comments! Panne...this line: "or lather seeds it from bullpit" might be translated as: "or (r)ather seeds [as in sowing seeds, or more vulgar as in mating bulls...(l)ather...soapy...see?] from the (pul)pit or (bullpit...if you go with a more vulgar interpretation)...this line more accurately describing sowing of words from the pulpit...indoctrination...as one might sow seeds. However...I like your take on it too: "or rather sees if from bullpit" ...it adds new depth and meaning. Jellybean King |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
WOW!! i love this kind of rhythmic word play,LOVE IT!! This was excellent to my eyes (and ears) wonderful wonderful wonderful sammio much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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