Open Poetry #12 |
Thrill |
Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Found in the still night Perfume scent of love A Thrill fills my heart In a forest of darkness I've found you to love, In my eyes My perfect companion We dance in the wind Over sparkling springs flowing Beyond the laws of nature With the moon in your eyes Your voice still haunts me Into bright brilliant daylight Sun shining through light clouds A kaleidoscope of color Our souls will find the path Bewitched by your action I seek harmony with you The fruit of our labor So beautifully in front of us Perfect union Triumph of the will A final justice fills my soul The joy of experiencing Each thrill of you Great souls have wills; feeble ones have only wishes. ~ Chinese Proverb ~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well, Wilfred, you've got me sitting up straight and paying attention! Thanks for the "Thrill" lovie! lol... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MMMMMMMM the thought of love like this just THRILLS me to my soul...you know that dont you? We all have wings...some of us don't know why |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do believe quote: that these are my favorite lines! Well done! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Your words are always a Thrill for me. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--In the still night many beautiful dreams come true. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice love poem, Will. It sure can be a great feeling, when it works... Sandra |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Everyone - forgive me if I give a blanket thanks - -I spend so little time online of late - I hope to have more time soon Thank you so much for you warm and kind replies |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful romantic love poem Bill! Like you always write so very well with a dash of class and depth of heart....ethome |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
ethome - Golly gee - 'class and depth' - ~G~ thank you~S~ |
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