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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Imagination if my imagination were to flow wonder, wonder, where it'd go probably on to a surreal dream where life is quiet, and possibly serene IF I were to be loved, as can be with sweetness, light and melody would I know, then, he be the one that would, could, eclipse the sun? IF my imagination were to allow that this love would come, somehow would I know him through darkest night? and that he was to be, Mr. Right? IF I were allowed to dream, I would ~ and imagine then that I could make this man so pleased to be in the midst of this, my company and I imagine, thus, in this mist just how he would then so kiss and nothing would so ever compare to these feelings that I would share if if there ever might be that one who could do and say, and leave undone all that was past, to see forward to we then he would be as my imagination sees. 01.26.01 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, you know without me telling you that this is the utter best. So truly wonderful, and as always you present it perfectly. Beautiful work dear heart. I love it, truly I do Take care love as always Majestica Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine...the beauty of imagination is that it can take us anywhere and, although I have never experienced it firsthand, they say sometimes dreams come true...may they for you  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--You dream a sweet dream...and write well too. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ With your poetic imagination - you can fly~ you can fly~ Hugs ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Karilea!! Denise |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh yes, imagination is the greatest thing one can have, for it helps us see things beyond what we all see in reality. We create our own special characters and worlds, and dreams and ambitions. And this love you speak of, it's only a matter of time before you find the object of your affection touching reality. You have such a beautiful heart, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh boy, Sunshine made my day 2day... Thank you PoetFriend for this write is one of the sweetest I have read... Into my library it shall go... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Ooopsie, I forgot 2clic that library thread... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha...you are always there to read, my friend, and you do my heart good...thank you!... 'Deer...some of us fight to dream...others fight the dream...yet, no one has taken my dreams away...I think I'll look forward to the day that some of them may come true...afterall, there IS a DisneyWorld, isn't there? {~,^}... Martie, so glad you liked it, thank you!... Marge, I'm clapping.... because I also believe but...YOU knew that!...{~,^} Thank you O Poster/Reader/Poet of 15,000+ smiles... Noah...exactly...where would all of the glories of mankind be if NOT for the dreamer?... Coco...thank you...times Two! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful imagintion of very possible happenings....good write Karilea....I hope these things come true for someone as their imagination envisions it....ethome |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
your dream = my dream and although I can't write with your imagination If I could - I'd add: your imagination = mine as well (another Karilea post for my treasure box) |
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