Open Poetry #12 |
A Masochists Sorrow |
Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
There she is A face starring into me Only a picture painted with pain Formed from the blood I spill Strangely, her eyes mirror the same loneliness That no one sees So alone, so afraid, so addicted Her eyes glisten even while overshadowed by the crimson Demons dance around her in hell's cruel joke of life And again she screams that silent blood red scream And again her words of fear pool on her skin And again no one hears... "Close your eyes, and you'll see." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
We heard this one loud and clear. WELCOME TO PASSIONS. This was a very powerful write and I look forward to seeing many more from you. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This made me cry...brought emotions to the surface I thought I had buried... welcome...and thank you. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quit LOOKING at ME! WOW! powerful piece.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent. . . truly excellent. . . says a lot of things. . . welcome my friend. . . thank you for sharing. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Intersting piece. I liked it. Welcome to passions. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
There is incredible pain and searing honesty in this, a very dramatic first post. Welcome to Passions. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Welcome to our world...what a powerful entrance you have made We all have wings...some of us don't know why |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Check your e-mail for a special greeting! |
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Midnight Dew Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 50Forest Lake, MN |
This is a powerful and wonderful write. I look forward to reading more (hint hint...). Thank you for contributing so wonderfully!! ~Caitlin Hull~ "The Holy Spirit makes up all our souls, and when it 'flexes' it makes us do great things." |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~"And again she screams that silent blood red scream And again her words of fear pool on her skin And again no one hears..." ~WoW! It's like a good punch in the chest, that there write. It's heavy,...and chilling in a sad way. Take care. *Peace. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
This gave me chills, or it might have been the new england air... i loved it! Welcome my friend! -Jeremy Raulinaitis "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
This one is heard my friend ,loved it, echoed through the silence, look forward to more. great job |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow ~ painfully powerful! You speak of this nightmare extremely well! Welcome to Passions! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions...... "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
It is so very frightening to know that I am not alone in my pain. It makes me hate the world ten times over, to know that pain is not only my mallady. Why is it that we are here? "I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal |
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