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Secret Whisper
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since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

0 posted 2001-01-26 11:21 AM

There she is
A face starring into me
Only a picture painted with pain
Formed from the blood I spill
Strangely, her eyes mirror the same loneliness
That no one sees
So alone, so afraid, so addicted

Her eyes glisten even while overshadowed by the crimson
Demons dance around her in hell's cruel joke of life

And again she screams that silent blood red scream
And again her words of fear pool on her skin
And again no one hears...

"Close your eyes, and you'll see."

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-01-26 11:23 AM

We heard this one loud and clear. WELCOME TO PASSIONS. This was a very powerful write and I look forward to seeing many more from you.

If you find yourself stranded in a storm
...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-01-26 11:32 AM

This made me cry...brought emotions to the surface I thought I had buried...

welcome...and thank you.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2001-01-26 12:32 PM

quit LOOKING at ME!

WOW! powerful piece....

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-01-26 12:56 PM

excellent. . . truly excellent. . .

says a lot of things. . . welcome my friend. . . thank you for sharing. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

5 posted 2001-01-26 11:32 PM

Intersting piece. I liked it. Welcome to passions.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

6 posted 2001-01-27 01:47 AM

There is incredible pain and searing honesty in this, a very dramatic first post. Welcome to Passions.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

7 posted 2001-01-27 01:51 AM

Welcome to our world...what a powerful entrance you have made

We all have wings...some of us don't know why

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-01-27 06:49 AM

Welcome to Passions! Check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Midnight Dew
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 50
Forest Lake, MN

9 posted 2001-02-01 11:57 PM

This is a powerful and wonderful write. I look forward to reading more (hint hint...). Thank you for contributing so wonderfully!!

~Caitlin Hull~

"The Holy Spirit makes up all our souls, and when it 'flexes' it makes us do great things."

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

10 posted 2001-02-02 12:06 PM

~"And again she screams that silent blood red scream
And again her words of fear pool on her skin
And again no one hears..."

~WoW! It's like a good punch in the chest, that there write. It's heavy,...and chilling in a sad way. Take care. *Peace.

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

11 posted 2001-02-02 01:00 AM

This gave me chills, or it might have been the new england air... i loved it! Welcome my friend!

-Jeremy Raulinaitis

"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

12 posted 2001-02-02 01:18 AM

This one is heard my friend ,loved it, echoed through the silence, look forward to more. great job

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

13 posted 2001-02-02 01:24 AM

Wow ~ painfully powerful! You speak of this nightmare extremely well!

Welcome to Passions!

Take care,
Melissa~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

14 posted 2001-02-02 10:04 AM

Welcome to Passions......

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

15 posted 2001-04-15 06:46 PM

It is so very frightening to know that I am not alone in my pain. It makes me hate the world ten times over, to know that pain is not only my mallady. Why is it that we are here?

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

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