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Open Poetry #12

To the one I passion for

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

0 posted 2001-03-08 12:52 PM

Hey all, this is a funky little piece I did in a workshop session in one of my classes. Enjoy

We are an invisible evolution of art
getting thicker quicker.
I am the upfront scarlet woman artist
and you are the
marble hydration firing the furnace,
talking back with a
"Wake up sleeping beauty this is no fairytale".

Rampage matches rampage.
Our recipe has an ideal aroma
with a little extra bite.
Propel me beyond the stars,
fall back to our Erotic Astrology.

Viva your kismet baby.
I love you.
Enjoy the difference.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-03-08 04:42 PM

quote:
Viva your kismet baby.
I love you.
Enjoy the difference.

fabulous!

great write, angela! take a bow

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-03-08 08:56 PM

You go girl

[This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 03-08-2001).]

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-03-12 01:57 PM

Really outstanding work! Very well crafted!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-03-12 06:35 PM

"viva your kismet baby. . . "

I love that line!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

desperado
Member

since 1999-05-24

Posts 312
FT Hood,Tx

5 posted 2001-04-19 06:11 AM

ok so I'm a day late and a dollar short (hey now, no short people jokes), but viva? sounds pretty good. though I like that last line. enjoy the difference. sounds like s ultry enticement to me woo hoo!

People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard

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