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Angels in the Rain |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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I hear angels in the rain Just a call I can't explain Memories always worth the time when I'm alone. Dare I forget so easily What Cupid's arrows did for me Though I loved them then they still linger now. Walking in the heat and wet I can't forget with no regrets Angels in the rain Between the drops they call my name I see them clearly now. So I keep on my peaceful way After all I couldn't stay And though I've made mistakes I weep divine. Walking in the heat and wet I can't forget with no regrets Angels in the rain Between the drops they call my name I see them clearly now |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Oh ethome...this is such a perfect song...Dare I forget so easily What Cupid's arrows did for me Though I loved them then they still linger now...this is so evocative...the love the pain the memories.. [This message has been edited by Jaime Fradera (edited 12-03-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Jaime this is really great you got this posting thing working for you!! I sure will be looking forward to writing to you...great stuff!! thanks for the comments I appreciate them very much....take care and write up a storm....I know how it fills you with such happiness.....ethome |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
angels in the rain? oh...I can hear them too... the rhythm of their holy hearts tapping life upon my roof. A gust of wind is angel's wing... I feel the brush of feathered touch... yes, tonight, the angel's sing to me-- I think I am in love. Thank you, ethome, for the lovely inspiration...(hope ya didn't mind that...) hugs to you, I do understand. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey sweetheart remember you've got Acadia in your heart......and "poof de betts." Poor baby you're falling in love aren't ya? No of course I wouldn't mind it....glad I inspired you....makes you my poetic sis.....go get'em Celeste |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hi sweet poet man...am kicking myself here and you know why LOL...love this one |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Paula thanks for loving it I sure appreciate it you know that...ethome..... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome, Sir...as I peeked in to read, the sad loveliness of this piece was so ethereal, I think I spied rainbows in the raindrops 'round the crowns on the angels heads... and now I think I shall be happy all of this lovely Sunday... and this is a keeper for my library... < !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-03-2000).] |
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Wishmaster Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 24Luton, Bedfordshire, England |
Got to agree with the others: "Dare I forget so easily What Cupid's arrows did for me Though I loved them then they still linger now." This stanza positively jumps off the screen and pricks you anew. Fine poetry Wishmaster. ~ You cannot be what you want to be if you do not know who you are ~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you so much Sunshine I always look forward to hearing from you...thanks so much Thanks Wishmaster and welcome to Passions I'm pleased that you could join us...ethome |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Prinny True, you hooked me in with the promise of angels, and the fact that it's you of course. And love you delivered, this is delightful, angelic and truly utterly wonderful. I love it, as always, a marvellous piece from you, another triumph. Really well done.  Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 I loved this one very much, wonderful penned my friend. Charisma |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
**SOFT .. SINCERE** ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!!! ** FAVORITE LINE.. "And though I've made mistakes I weep devine." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ mutington/joyce [This message has been edited by mutington (edited 12-03-2000).] |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
I enjoyed this pome vary much and I can relate. I loved that you said no regrets. It can be sad when a relationships do not work out, but I think that we learn from them and should not regret. I also know how past loves can linger, the good and the bad. This is one of my fav pomes that i found so far. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* yes, dear one, this one touches the heart of me very deeply. Beautiful and sad in some ways too. Thank you so much for the read. I felt the music of your words again flow through me. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
thanks so much Marsha for the warm comments I really appreciate them a lot....ethome Thank you Charisma for taking the time to read this work..... Thanks very much Joyce for the comments and taking the time to read and say soft and sincere words....ethome Thanks Raleighbttrfly for the relationship comments amoung others really much appreciated!! Startime thank you for hearing the music and much love from me to you in return....ethome Eric |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Walking in the heat and wet I can't forget with no regrets Angels in the rain Between the drops they call my name I see them clearly now. So I keep on my peaceful way After all I couldn't stay And though I've made mistakes I weep divine. Walking in the heat and wet I can't forget with no regrets Angels in the rain Between the drops they call my name I see them clearly now ================== you write divine too... and sing divine as well and it SUBLIME for my mind I ADORE this angel kissed verse E-babes.. it needs to be illustrated and turned in to a Hallmark card...or a book this a special piece of writing poet sir jm I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Janet thank you so much my poet pet I really appreciate those kind thoughts they are so you and so wonderfully descriptive...you're just VANtastic in my books. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Ethome...this is so perfectly woven!! It ended with the perfect *sigh* my friend~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
How does a cowboy fall in love with a poem? Well when it causes him to read it over and over and then be left with a complete warmness deep in his every being...that is how and this one did just that. I do expect to see this one on the main site my friend. Your quill is doing more than mere wonders these days and I want to know your secret to finding such captivating lines. I promise not to over abuse it. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Butterflies for the visit I appreciate your comments always they are so enthusiastic and sincere......ethome Thanks cowboy for the visit yall come back now.... I don't think you have to worry about coming up with any captivating lines..I just read one of your poems and it was marvelous.. thanks once again my friend and keep'em comin partner...there's ranges out there to ride... giddup old paint!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
 Ethome~ A beautiful imagery filled piece which I enjoyed so very much...most lovely read Tracie~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 12-05-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you so much Tracie for the warm and friendly thoughts.....ethome |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
one of your most beautiful - most evocative -calling up such thoughts I'd suppressed - well done!!! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi ethome--you know I love your poetry because it is always a song that I hear...and you sing it so well. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
ethome, Beautiful my friend. You write with such feeling from the heart . . . always. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Ethome, this is as said earlier a 'BEAUTIFUL' expression from your heart One I shall keep in library too... coco |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
This is a very moving song. I'd love to hear the music to go with it, I enjoyed your art! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Ethome...this is great...just understated enough to be convincing.. and very moving. 'Walking in the heat and wet I can't forget with no regrets Angels in the rain Between the drops they call my name I see them clearly now.' It likes me. K |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank Wilfred for the visit and the kind comments...much appreciated my dear poet man. I hope you let them out and write them to us....ethome Martie thanks I think you know I'd sing to you anytime...ethome (you are my back-up singer after all) Thanks Lone wolf to you and Coco both for the from the heart comments I truly appreciate them...ethome Thanks Koko for the kind words and if I had any permanent music to go with it then I'd make sure you heard it.....ethome Severn...I like the understated statement I thank you for the kindnees of your comments and for taking the time to read this work!! ...take care....ethome......... |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Beautiful...simply beautiful...Everything else has already been said...I loved it...simply loved it... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
ethome-Tender, sweet words, nicely done, from the heart. I will mark this one for short cut to my favorites in the library. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ethome~ How did I not see this sooner?! This is so soft.........memories in the rain.......yes, I love this! -SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you very much Ladylightning for stopping in to visit and read...... glad to hear your comments...ethome Gemini thanks for you comment I really appreciate it and will visit you soon... ethome Thanks Sea for the soft comment glad to hear from you...always! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
There is an angel in the rain, she holds a steady beat, she often shoots the cupids arrows into the sweetest poets such as yourself, loved this one, sweet, lovely, and so dreamy. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Excellent flow to this ethome! Enjoyed the read. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Rosebud for being an angel in the rain I love those arrows especially if the love works......ethome Thanks VAS for the nice flow comment I appreciate you taking the time to read..... ethome...... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Ethome, I read this earlier.. and I didn't respond, so I had to stop in so I know I wouldn't forget to let you know how much I liked this poem It was very well written and I enjoyed reading it.. as I do all of your poems  ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Rosepetals for the visit ..even though you're reading when I don't know it I still feel it ....take care ethome |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So many new poets need to visit an angel... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Sunshine...you are one!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, One of your best, this one is an epopee. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening ethome, This is a keeper to me, so well written, with so very much feeling. I truly felt this writing as I read it. It is excellent. BC |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, better late than never, I hope....this is excellent, ethome...the poem sings itself and the thoughts behind the words are first class....tip o the Balladeer hat to ya, sir |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ethome, this has such a smooth and wonderful flow to it. The title grabbed my attention, and the words pulled me in......time and time again. Well done. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Angels and rain, What more could you want? well done! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is wonderfully sweet and tender Ethome ... magical in it's beauty ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How gentle phrases can touch so deeply is the mystery of your magical pen. This is a love song that will not be forgotten, just as the rememebrance of love and the tender moments to "weep devine". You have captured many hearts with this one Liz |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I'm so glad to see this here again...you know how much I love hearing you sing |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Seymour much appreciated kind sir!! Bill so good to hear from you again I really appreciate the comments...take care ethome Balladeer thanks for stopping in a for a read, much appreciated and thanks for the words sing themself comment....ethome |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Gentle spirit for the kind thoughts glad you could take the time to read. Eagle thanks for the flow and rhythum in your reply.."angels and rain what more could you want" thanks again Kit it's always so good to hear from you and I appreciate your comments so much! Thanks Elizabeth for your thoughts and the hearts touched comment..... I really am so glad to hear from you,always! ethome Paula you're such a sweetheart...I thank ya for droppin back in...ethome |
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