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Passions Gallery--Lone Wolf (she walks) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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the moon rises and she walks moonlight on new fallen snow and she walks nature is her domain the stars show the way like holes in the sky the songs of life the melodies of nature and she walks wind blows through trees telling of those gone before light filling the air heart beats and she walks sing out guardian to those down below sing to the moon life exists and she walks ------------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The image of her walking on that new fallen snow is so vivid. I can hear the snow crunch as she walks. You have captured a picture in my heart of one who is intune with nature. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sven....I'm still in awe of what you are doing. This is fantastic!  I could hear the crunch of the snow. And hey, LW, it's nice to get to know you better...I'm a nature buff too.. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I saw this one...and she does, doesn't she? I even felt that painful lung full of icy air, and watched her walk, magically and lightly, leaving no prints in the snow... This, John, is just touching and beautiful. with love and hugs for both of you... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful reference to her Sven..."sing to the moon...life exists." very appropriate lines...well done Sven! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, She walks and you soar. write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sven...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Given the loveliness of her name and this poem's actions, she not only walks, but listens intently, watches closely, and silently moves on... This... is beauty. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
truly loved this wonderful penned tribute, love the way she walks, great imagery here. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
she seems self-assured, in control of her life, able to stroll calmly through life's obstacles....wonderful write  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! Just as she is..... excellent poem sir. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, I am speechless here and you of all people know that is an accomplishment. Thank you very much for the poem. It is beautiful my friend.  Thanks to all of you for your comments. I appreciate it. LW< !signature--> Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 12-04-2000).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this is a beautiful poem to a beautiful lady. Wonderful job. I love these dedications. They are so filled with love. Much love to you from me Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
inot2B, thank you my friend. . . glad that you could see it. . . Irie, thank you, it's been fun to do. . . serenity, thank you. . . I tried to convey that feeling. . . ethome, thank you for reading my friend. . . Kehtry, I don't know that I soar, but thank you my friend. . . James, thank you my friend. . . Sunshine, I am humbled by your words. . . thank you. . . Charisma, thank you. . . I tried to convey the idea of walking in the woods on a lonely night. . . kaile, thank you. . . you see it perfectly. . . deVine, thank you for enjoying. . . Startime, thank you. . . I'm glad that you've been enjoying her work. . . Lone Wolf, glad that you enjoyed the poem. . . as you can see, you and your work are appreciated and enjoyed by many here. . . I'm glad that you became a member here and have become a poet in your own right. . . thank you. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, You are the king, Long live the king. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven What a tribute to your friend and mine, truly special piece ~HUGS~ to you ~HUGS~ to LW Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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