Open Poetry #11 |
Passions Gallery--Isis (she belongs) |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
she really doesn't belong here she doesn't belong to this time to this plane to this life she belongs there there on that other plane there where her life is celebrated there she is worshipped there her light fills the sky she is here here on this plane here it seems harder here it seems longer here there seems to be only darkness but from there she draws the light she draws the life she draws the strength she needs here to light the sky to fill the life to fight the fight here she speaks to one poet of word painter of life knower of roads singer of love she speaks to him and fills him with the spirit of her life and her love many do not understand the way that they walk but do they need to? for they walk their own way poet and goddess not together but parallel parallel, but joined together in the spirit a spirit of joy and love of peace and harmony for all eternity and so here she is there she is she lives she lives she laughs she laughs she loves maybe she really does belong here. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 12-01-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh yes, indeed, Isis belongs most certainly here...Yes! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven I was beginning to wonder when you where going to write this one about Isis..I know you have written about her before...these are lovely words for a lovely women that deserves all the blessings this world has to offer and one has already been fulfilled within your friendship...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, She is Isis, goddess of the Dawn, And you are Sir Sven Sword of Truth. Write on Kethry. Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
This is very good. You do seem to know your subjects very well. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
YES...you have done her gentle kind ways justice...as I knew You could... Lisa was one of the first people I met in passions and in my early days of posting in DP..she was the light that shined and tended to her flock of sad poets with a soft guidence... wonderfully done..perfect presentation this is one of my favs of your gallery. jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Dear Sven, What a beautiful moving tribute hon. I'm tickled pink, thanks so much And thankyou Sunshine, Janet Marie, James, Kethry and Passions Voice for the kind comments too. If I have done nothing else right in my life, I certainly did two things right here in Passions - coming here in the first place and making true friends as wonderful as our Sir Sven. *hugs* Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Fantastic Sven..... It's nice to get to know these poets from your words! Wonderful people, wonderful you! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, indeed she does. . . James, yes, I have written about and for Isis several times before. . . she has always been my friend, and I could not do this series without including her. . . thank you my friend. . . Kethry, yes she is my friend. . . yes she is. . . PV, I know this one very well. . . Jan, thank you. . . Lisa was also the first person that I met here in Dark. . . her light still shines to any that will seek. . . glad that you liked. . . Irie, I'm glad that you're getting to know these wonderful people through my words. . . I know so many of them. . . thank you my friend. . . Lisa, the words just don't exist to tell you what you've done in my life. . . I've tried. . . but there always seems to be so much more than I can say in just words. . . you've always been there for me, a true friend and a kindred spirit. . . a heart of gold, and a light that shines always. . . thank you for everything. . . and I hope that we'll always be friends till the end. . . thank you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ Doing some catching up and the first one I had to read was this one for Isis...You have done her proud my friend, this truly is most beautiful and most fitting...well done ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i have no hesitation in saying thatt this is one of the best poems i have read from you so far...simply breath-taking and awe-inducing.... |
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