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Circle of life senryu
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Circle of life senryu |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 The circle of life cyclus of new birth and death related on time |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
lovely... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very nice.  With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Charisma--Wonderful Senryu..nicely done. Poeminister |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sunshine....Dragonpoe.....poeminister: thank you for your lovely comment....and taking time to read and reply. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
OKAY! and Amen. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, This is fabulous, cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Interloper: thank you for taking time to read and reply Daniel: glad that you like it, thank you for your comment |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
forgot to make a thread.  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi, i like your haiku...seems like you are adding a philosophical touch to your work.. thanx for sharing |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Oh ... this is so pretty. I love the magic of circles ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Kaile: thank you for your reply, and you are right, it is indeed more philosophic Marge: thank you, I am so glad that you like it, its always a pleasure to read your comments. |
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