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Who Sings
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Who sings so sweetly tonight, That makes me pause my dreaming, Who sings to glowing moonlight, A crescent barely beaming, Who sings so softly and low, That words are just a murmur Left just outside my window So I go open my door To hear the wandering song, But the singers went away, Not staying one place too long, Nighttime song to make the day They Carol sweetly tonight, and makes me pause from dreaming. Gloom |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is replete with gentle imagery - and it all combines to create a poem which itself gently glows... 'Who sings so softly and low, That words are just a murmur Left just outside my window' Excellent write, Gloom...  K |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Very excellent writing, enjoyed the read... Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
through the gloom the light dawns in Caroler's song... lovely... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a poem filled with christmas spirit..very nice Professor.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Severn, I am glad you liked my words Thank you, Poetminister I am pleased you liked and took a moment to respond Thank you, Sunshine For taking the time to read and respond. Thank you, Victoria, Yes, written in response to conversation with a friend, Living with my words about other’s lives. Gloom |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This was enchanting... |
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