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Stars Dance |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Stars Dance In the starry night our spirits waltz together Souls touching one to one uniting forever The stars shimmering playing a concerto That makes hearts and souls fly and flow Music that only we two can hear and see Loves tune carries us to where we shall be Lifted into the air dancing through the stars Hearts bound together free of distrusts bars love unfettered free to be whatever it will Delightful love please let us take our fill Stars are calling us into their magic dance Let us join them while we have this chance Our spirits are spinning on into the night And our bodies join them in this magic flight The beautiful moon and the stars call us on Then we are spinning faster into the sun We float for years eternally in lovers bliss And touch heaven again as we tenderly kiss Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh Majestic Mushy Marsha, this is so beautiful! I loved this, as you knew I would!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ph, big sis....... This is one of my favorites of yours!! How I love the vision of lovers dancing in the stars!! This is so beautiful......  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, thank you as always you are a real sweetie. I was feeling musical Take care Mushy  Lil sis, thanks love you know I appreciate it, and I surely do. Take care Bubbles  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like the vision of this especially the kissing part..James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
sooooo romantic Marsha....I can almost hear the music that played for you two.. wonderful waltz.... Charisma |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
How delightfully romantic and filled with love your work is. I love all I read.*sigh* simply wonderful. You know love and share it with us beautifully. Thank you for this beautiful read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Such a lovely lovely dance...beautifully played...hey theres a thought...maybe your Knight can go to the ball...sweep his lady off her feet...by midnight of course |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Such a lovely lovely dance...beautifully played...hey theres a thought...maybe your Knight can go to the ball...sweep his lady off her feet...by midnight of course |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James, thank you and the kiss is definitely the best bit. And the dance of course Glad you enjoyed it.  Charisma, I can still feel it too. Thank you, I do appreciate you I really do. Startime, yes I know love, and she knows me, and I'm really happy this comes through. Paula love should I thank you twice, oh what the heck, thank you, thank you, thank you. I've done another one, but my knight, different knight, same problem, doesn't do a lot in this one either. But he gets the maid, that's an improvement. And he's brave, he's got a medal and a chest to pin it on Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Stars dance and so do your words. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
You show loves waltz wonderfully my friend...dance and dance, keep it alive. jwesley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Interloper, thank you truly, I do thank you. I'm sorry it's taken so long but I forgot about this one. I really did. So thank you Jwesley, thank you Jimmy, I'm way behind on some of my stuff and I'm afraid this one slipped by me. But I do want you to know I do appreciate it, I truly do. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Loved the idea of souls and stars dancing... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marsha... souls dancing...i love that! this was so beautiful and romantic. thanks so much for sharing this one. i really needed to read this tonight. take care ~amy~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Elizabeth, thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this, I like this one too. Amy love, thank you kindly, are you okay? Remember I'm here if you need me, and take care of yourself. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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