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The Golden Skein of Word
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The Golden Skein of Word |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Golden Skein of Word he pondered words swelled thoughts rambled passions welled he penned expressions flew demeanor changed obsessions grew she quietly mused found words on wind read then what he wrote her secret touched within she penned expressions flew demeanor changed obsessions grew quiet grew he in her read heart pounded pleasantly penned he word with hidden grace wistfully thought of her face she glowed in smile inner secrets trembled wound her pen around a reflection he read with deep introspection he deigned to draw the skein of pure raw affection from her heart complexion he'd impart she softly struggled to catch her breath as feelings from her he softly wrest from the golden skein of word he drew from her the shy quickly flew electric in their obsessive zeal the golden skeins of word grew real and life again poured forth from within having touched inner secrets therein they penned expressions flew demeanor changed obsessions grew Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Just got sun burned from the bright of your poem. My fault, forgot to put on lotion. *L* |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh what a wonderful way to start my day. Your beautiful words. This poem is so very touching and loving. I love it. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
she quietly mused found words on wind read then what he wrote her secret touched within she penned expressions flew demeanor changed obsessions grew quiet grew he in her read heart pounded pleasantly penned he word with hidden grace wistfully thought of her face ====================== HOW COOL IS THIS....way cool.... excellent Sun... both your very intense verse and presentation obsession grew...yes...exactly. jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey there you with the stars in your eyes.. yes sir this is a romantic little gem if I ever read one ....ah I've got to get out my own skein of words and say to you that with words like this and a name like Sunshine you could melt the cold thoughts of despair like the sun melts April snow...yes siree! "she softly struggled to catch her breath, as feelings from her he softly wrest from the golden skein of word he drew from her the shy quickly flew." Just great!! loved it muchly!! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is just beautiful Sunshine....and I loved the way you wrote it too....I might have to borrow your formation cause I truly loved it! (Smiles) Nathan |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Ahhhh the power and the magic of the Golden Skein...you penned it like I've never seen it done before Karilea...this is fabulous! Into my library with this one most definately! The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Ah yes. . . to wind one's self in the skein of the heart. . . Wonderful my friend. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is magnificent, it truly is. This is beautiful, and still you get better and better. I adore this one love I truly do. Utterly wonderful. Take care Majestic Marsha   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy...you make me smile {~,^}..., thank you... Startime, it pleases me that you liked this...thank you... JM...how COOL you are for picking out your fav lines....you're too cute...thank you... ethome...somehow, sometimes, stars and sunshine go together...that's a wow comment, thank you!... Nate...welcome home...been awhile...and of course you may...thank you... BDC, I shall humbly reside in your library...with pleasure...thank you!... Sven, this is slowing wending it's way to yet another idea....thank you... Marsha, if I am better, it is because I might draw on the talents that surround me here in the blue walls of prolific pens...don't you think? Yes, of course, you agree!...thank you, English dove... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Karilea - Obsessions??? Really? woo hoo c'mere, ya lil tease... what?! You weren't thinking of me??? *woebegone eyes* hmmmpphhh - I'm still gonna fantasize |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
KArilea, this is a poem to touch a heart softly... Everything involving this poem is absolutely wonderful! Thank you for all you share..... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To first read LongJohn, then Balladeer...my heart wonders...which is more sincere...? Thank you both, Gentle Men...pensive mood lately... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sunshine, the entire poem was just...Pretty! the words and formatt alike... *smiles* -Tier |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You wonder which is more sincere? Between LongJohn and I? I am wounded....  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tier, formats are wonderful things to mold and make one's own...thank you for reading... and 'Deer? Now the question has answered itself, has it not? {~,^} Those who leave kind words come back again, and again...those who are fickle, do not...Thank you...{you may wipe the frown away now...} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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