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Manda_1982
Junior Member

since 2000-11-01

Posts 24
Washington State,USA

0 posted 2000-11-27 05:49 PM

If I had the power…
I’d transfer your pain to myself.
I’d take every hurt, and ache you feel,
And I’d make them my own.
Every tear you’ve cried,
Every sigh that has escaped your lips,
Every sleepless night,
Every sob,
Would be mine.

If I had strength unparalleled…
I’d hold you in my arms,
And let you cry,
Until every tear had drained from your eyes.
Every night you spent weeping,
Every feeling of unhappiness,
Every regretful emotion you felt,
Every empty stare into space,
Would be mine.

I’m sorry that I don’t possess that power,
And I’m sorry that I don’t hold that strength.
I’m sorry, that I can’t make your world right.
But I’ll lend what I can,
You can have my shoulder to cry on,
And my hand to hold.
And I’m going to love you,
As much as you may need.
Until, you have the power, and the strength,
To move on.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-11-27 06:40 PM

My Gosh! This is one of the sweetest poems I think I have ever read! Loved this one

-SEA

Manda_1982
Junior Member

since 2000-11-01

Posts 24
Washington State,USA

2 posted 2000-11-27 07:54 PM

Aww thank you SO much!

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2000-11-27 09:07 PM

Manda~

simply beautiful. the light of your
heart and love show wonderfully. i'm
looking forward to reading more of your
work. take care.
~amy~

Manda_1982
Junior Member

since 2000-11-01

Posts 24
Washington State,USA

4 posted 2000-11-28 02:39 PM

Thank you both

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2000-11-28 05:53 PM

Liked it!!!!!!!

Welcome to passion!!!!!!!!!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-11-28 08:10 PM

This is lovely, Manda! Very nicely done!

Denise

Manda_1982
Junior Member

since 2000-11-01

Posts 24
Washington State,USA

7 posted 2000-12-01 09:27 PM

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!-Thanks for the positive feedback, much appreciated

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