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Caught In The Current |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Caught In The Current ~*Marge Tindal*~ Sometimes it is a babbling brook sometimes a stream that my tears took sometimes a waterfall cascading I navigate this river - sometimes raging Upon it's currents I am tossed reaching an ocean of emotion where I am lost upon the waves of deep despair tossed on the shore left lying there Slammed again at tide's return thinking that someday I will learn The river of tears will always flow where my memories want me to go I hope I discover how to break free before this river of tears drowns me Until then .... I'm treading memories *This piece was inspired by a post by Daniel JD entitled 'River Of Tears' Thank you, JD~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I too, have been inspired by our Daniel, many times...and oh, I wish I could do this as gracefully! I love ya much...and if ya don't stop writing this sweet? I swear, I will start calling you "mommy!" Winks and much love to ya, me "auntie marge?" grins. |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Marge, this is wonderful...I love the conclusion. Robert Joseph |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, Just beautiful, very sad, but a great write. "The river of tears will always flow where my memories want me to go" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Keep on treading those memories because while you are there you keep pumping out these wonderful poems...and I wouldn't want you to drown in your own tears...well, because we need you here to talk to us through all your clever poetic ideas...write on!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, This is such a fabulous piece from you. You are a really great writer, this is utterly wonderful. I love this one too. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is a wonderful piece Marge. Well done. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderfully emotive writing Marge. The visual current of emotions poured into this beautiful piece are so very vivid. This is lovely, dear friend.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Marge, Marge, I love this, you just inspired me, and I'm already working on my 3000 posts. I don't have time for Christmas shopping I love your poems, can never get enough. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Powerful and beautiful, Marge. I loved the emotions expressed in this. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This then is woman...sharing, caring, loving, and a most rare individual indeed... well done Marge! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ LOL @ "mommy" .. I like 'Mom' better. JD just inspired the heck out of me with his write. RJ~ Thank you - me too ! JD~ Well, I sure thank YOU for the inspiration ! ETHome~ Well, not really my tears - but the tears of many ! Thank you. Marsha~ Thanks, hon. GentleSpirit~ I appreciate the reply. Kit~ Hi, lady !*Hugs* to you ! Kathleen~ Oh, boy ... just what we both need - MORE inspiration ! Thanks, doll. Elizabeth~ Thank you, honey. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Whoops ! Should have refreshed before I replied. Thanks, hon ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Marge, This piece is beautiful, poignant and very emotional...I love the imagery and thanks for sharing this excellent piece! Peace, Nate |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
boy have I felt this way. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge Precious piece you have here....love the imagery you give us...thank you for sharing. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Treading memories..yes.. i like that Marge...enjoyed very much.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- beautiful as always, my friend.. 'I hope I discover how to break free before this river of tears drowns me Until then .... I'm treading memories' your muse gets me everytime... now, i think i need to go find Daniel's poem.. hugs to you, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
this is beautful, love the last line "treading tears" Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate, my friend~ I am so pleased to share my thoughts with you. Thank you for the reply. Kathleen~ I guess we all have felt it at some time or another, hon. Keep treading .... Charisma~ Hugs to you for your response. Thank you, sweet lady. Victoria~ Thanks for the thoughtful reply. Vicky~ Hi there, hon. Yeah ... this little muse brings such lovely gifts. I knew you'd like it. Thank you for always being here. *HUGS* WhispersCaress~ I pleased to know that you enjoyed it. Thank you for letting me know. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Many of your poems have struck me with their beauty - others their hope, their format = or imagination. This one struck so very close - it deserves my praise as it spoke directly to some current thoughts I'm struggling to convey - Thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ If I've thrown you a lifeline - I'm pleased to know it helps. *Hugs*, sweet poet. Thank you for the glowing compliments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahh my sweet friend, you do know how to capture the essence of emotions so well. I loved the whole FLOW of this one as it has your signature on it and I MUST find Daniel's poem to see the wonderful work that inspired this piece. I am sure this one itself will be the inspiration for many many smiles as those who find themselves in the raging current will now have something not only to relate to but also to find comfort in. Hugs to you my friend. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ You put a smile on my face just by being here today ! !  Hi there, doll ! You know I love you ... so stick around ! *Kisses* And thanks, love - got the e's ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marge, I too, am leary of getting caught in the currents, but you'd have to expect that, me being an electrician, LOL. Good poem! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ LOL ! Funny man you are. Thanks for the read and the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Another great piece Marge. You write so well of emotion and the soul. -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
Very well written Marge- good flow, hmm I guess that is fitting though regarding the subject |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sweet Marge, all I will say is I likes I likes I likes... And I'm keeping this poem of your's 4 many many many more reading nites... hugs2U |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KitKat~ I appreciate your kind reply. I just respond to the emotions and let them take me where they want me to go. JBowie~ LOL @ flow. Thank you for the reply. Dani~ You slipped in there on me. Thank you, love ... enjoy it over and over again. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 12-04-2000).] |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Hi again wow again yep... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey margie girl Boy am I glad to read you  I have had problems with my PC and I've missed so much lately  this peice is just an incredible read...well inspired Margie...well done ~HUGS~ my friend Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ Hi doll - so glad you're in to read. Thanks for being here. Tracie~ Really glad to know why you were gone. And doubly glad to see you back. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
This is beautiful Marge, the words flow as sweetly as the water. I really enjoyed this and thank you for sharing it. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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