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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Thunder Dark clouds gathering rolling thunder and lightning mighty power sight Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charisma, wonderful Haiku. When's your birthday your Tuesday or My Tuesday? Date please so I won't let it pass unremembered. Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I am glad that you like the haiku... I enjoy doing this more and more, don't know if it's the right way, but well I am learning  my birthday is next tuesday... 28 november |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Charisma, you're doing it right! This is excellent. . . keep it up. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
it seems right to me... glad to see that you are spreading your poetic wings and be sure that i will read what you have to offer... write on, fellow haikuist |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This piece is great Charisma...I loved the graphic too! Peace, Nathan |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This piece is great Charisma...I loved the graphic too! Peace, Nathan |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ I liked this one, the graphic goes perfectly with it! -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ You are doing just wonderfully with this Haiku. A delight to see and read. *Hugs* to you, dear poet friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Charisma, Wonderful haiku...nicely done. Poeminister |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh I do enjoy Haikus ... very nicely done Charisma, and perfect graphic! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, How very powerful in such wonderfully chosen words. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sven: thank you for your kind reply, I am glad that you like it. Kaile: thank you my friend for your wonderful words, and I am honoured that you like to read what I am offering inhere... hope always that it is worth to read Nate: and I thank you twice to come in and take the time to read and reply.. I'm glad that you liked it. Sea: thank you, my friend...your comments means a lot for me....appreciated them well. Marge: (((hugs))) back at ya, and you know that I love to have your comments', and I am glad that you like it...thank you for taking time to read. Poeminister: thank you for your kind reply, and that you stop by. Kit: I am glad that you love Haiku's...and like this little one from me. Daniel: thank you for your wonderful reply, its always a pleasure to read your comments. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I love the passion and power of thunder storms so the title drew me but the vision your words gave me pulled me in. Thank you so very much for this wonderful read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Startime: thank you for your wonderful comment, and I like thunderstorms either, if they are far away, but it's always mighty to view it. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Happy Birthday!!!! A beatuiful Haiku...from a beautiful heart! May your day be filled with blessings to help you celebrate~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Butterfly: thank you for your wonderful wishes and blessings.... it was a wonderful day indeed. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Very very lovely writing. I loved this haiku and your graphic. I also write haiku forms and I look forward to reading your work. i was at your homepage a bit already. Very well done , my new friend!!!! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just because some people are just too lovely to forget~  LOVE YOU my friend~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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