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A Wistful Hush .............a sonnet for serenity
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A Wistful Hush .............a sonnet for serenity |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A wistful hush is heard, come dark. The midnight air in swirls of blue, As silent thoughts came forth to stir The full of moon, spreads over you. In arms of light, she reaches out To seek to comfort, warm your cold. The smiles then shared, fill both with joy Each kiss in time, a forever hold. A touch of yours, a gentle brush Of fingertips to soft of cheek A breath inhaled, blue eyes that sweep Across the silent, feelings speak A world of passion, treasured gold A wistful hush, to yet unfold. ~Wynter < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-01-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely words as always Wynter...  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Absolutely beautiful!! Just like serenity.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wish I had the words to tell you how much you moved me... This touched my heart, so intensely, I was so BLUE...I would not even read the forums...and a friend said, "hey. you need to read this." I thank you, so much, m'friend, hand-over-heart, and I only pray that everyone knows the difference, one act of kindness, one moment of grace, can mean... Thank you much...again. You pretty much rocked me world with this...was most unexpected...hugs. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~Victoria thank you, as always I look forward to your visits ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* filled with such love and tenderness. This was truly an enjoyable read. A wonderfully soft way to start my day. Thank you so much. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Wynter this is such a well written beautiful poem and its made even more beautiful as its a gift of inspiration found in another poets work... you have captured Sen's grace perfectly ... wonderful writing...wonderful gesture take care jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Nothing short of charming...lovely work, Wynter. Robert Joseph |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Poet deVine- thank you, and I agree *s serenity- I loved your response to my poem...and the phrase in my title was so meaningful to me, so it is you I must thank for inspiring me to release my feelings this way...some days I need to just "feel" and today was one of them...you deserve the huggzz ...  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There seems to be a lovely, tender rippling effect of giving lately...and I don't think it's just because the season has arrived...this is lovely... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful writing, Wynter. Serenity is a very special lady and deserves a world of kindness. This is so very nice of you... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
This is equal to a bouquet of roses... lovely tribute! -Tier |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Startime- your responses are so enlightening, they are almost poetic in themselves, thank you huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you jm, serenity's words often touch me in that way and inspire me to write. Robert- I am always pleased when you stop to read and leave your soft words, thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Balladeer- she is indeed special as are many others on here. I am always inspired by the talent here. Thank you ~Wynter Tier- a bouquet of roses..hmmmm..I have never received any...thank you, I will take those words as if they were scented in real huggzz and I love your name...I would call you Tierdrop...for stopping in ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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