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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Vague flickers of my mind in speak every solace that I seek candle stubs in melted form - I love them. How they flaunt- conform... art of practice what they preach - the ever-yearning flame of stretch.. and strife of all that's not found yet - confirmation... disbelief. A hope in burn, a fire dance shadow's play the darkness trance solitaire - sweet romance-- deck in stack of sweet relief... Oh brush my tears, as if, you'd heard. sanctify my every word... whisper to me love absurd, oh hold me...still... my shivers... fear. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love it ...love absurd... if I could get there I'd take those Louisiana shivers out of your soul....and take away that fear until it was...well....love absurd...yeah I would!! You're on a roll there Serenity keep'em comin...ethome |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A hope in burn, a fire dance shadow's play the darkness trance solitaire - sweet romance-- deck in stack of sweet relief... Oh brush my tears, as if, you'd heard. sanctify my every word... whisper to me love absurd, oh hold me...still... my shivers... fear. ================= its never absurb if we need it .... this is soooo YOU.. me candle dancing sweet I do so love when you emote in this style.. with such grace .... "candle stubs in melted form - I love them. How they flaunt- conform..." how cool is that verse... way cool..like the poet that wrote it  me loves ya me sweet ...muchly me Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hmm..tried to pick a favorite line..couldn't..I love them all...and isn't love absurd? LOL |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Stunning, beautiful. The form was great, too, kind of grabbed you and pulled you along. Loved everything about this. Sandra |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey You!!!! this is greattttt! Love absurd? Indeed! Maree  "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very nice Serenity. Althought absurd is a bit of an understatement for the word love. Rich |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'll agree with that. . . Contradiction also. . . excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all for the sweet replies...and love absurd? Lawd, ain't it the truth? lol...and ethome? it WAS a bit chilly in here today...until I read that heart warming reply...thanks much!!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I majored In "love absurd" in college...can I play, too? As always, I love the style.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A hope in burn, a fire dance shadow's play the darkness trance solitaire - sweet romance-- deck in stack of sweet relief... Oh brush my tears, as if, you'd heard. sanctify my every word... whisper to me love absurd, Loved it...all of it and will save it for another day...to make me smile and remind me how absurd life can be ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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