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Language of the Trees |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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The breeze of temptation lovely as a swan luring sweet words in waterfalls of bliss fluttering, a butterfly upon a tea rose why does the heart entangle itself? weaving silken threads of hope drowning in oceanic passions of the continental slope listen to rustling of the leaves in the language of the trees whispering idiom secrets universal to the heart listen to the bluebirds and song of each blade of grass unweave the heart of despair A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
VICTORIA, this is lovely and heart tugging in every verse... Thank you dear lady for this touching read  Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-01-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ My goodness - this is so pretty ! 'fluttering, a butterfly upon a tea rose' Oh, how delicate is the imagery. Thank you for being a poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The breeze of temptation lovely as a swan luring sweet words in waterfalls of bliss fluttering, a butterfly upon a tea rose why does the heart entangle itself? weaving silken threads of hope drowning in oceanic passions of the continental slope ================ your imagery is always so wonderful Victoria.. you write so poetically pretty its always a pleasure to read your work take care jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria, I enjoyed the rise and fall of this piece, like a finely crafted song. Robert Joseph |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Coco..thank you..and for taking time to read...appreciate your comments.. Marge..Thank you very much..i cant think of anything i would rather be doing than writing Janet marie..Thank you Janet..nice of you to say Robert..i just said tonight..i wonder where Robt is? ..and you popped in ha..nice of you to visit Robt.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
unweave the heart of despair if only it were that easy ~Victoria ...sweetly beautiful as always ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
"listen to rustling of the leaves in the language of the trees whispering idiom secrets universal to the heart" <--- love this verse, though I did enjoy the entire piece With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Victoria is that ever beautiful the way you put these lines together to hold so much metaphorical emotional meaning...very very pretty kiddo!!! ...loved it...ethome |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Wynter..thank you..well you just have to listen once in a while..dont you have any bluebirds where you live ha... dragonpoe..thank you so much..nice to hear from you.. ethome..thank you for those kind words especially the kiddo part ha..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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