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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
"Magic Things" A swan gliding on a lake A lover's embrace Staying out late and sleeping in the next day These are some magic things Roses given by a lover Poems from an admirer Songs sung to her son from a mother Winter snow, arts and crafts, pictures of a friend's joyous face Those are things that can't be replaced and are magic things Bees gatheing honey Donating money to the hungry A family that is affectionate and loving You can find magic things every where you turn and look I find magic in a book Those who can cook, look at their creations They are magic things And trust me They are as wonderful as they seem!  ~Lisa Kennedy~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* yes these are all magically romantic. I loved this poem. Thank you so much. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very good, Lisa. The world is filled with magical things many times we just take for granted...you point that out very nicely...  |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'A swan gliding on a lake A lover's embrace Staying out late and sleeping in the next day These are some magic things' Hey Lisa! Great writing! These are definitely some of my favorite 'magic' things, too! Welcome to Passions. You've made a very nice entrance, lil' ô¿ô! sp 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lisa, This is great kiddo! Loved this, I did. Some of my "favorite magical things" too Take care sweetie.~me~ |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Lisa, I really enjoyed this poem.....its so carefree. Especially the part about the lover's embrace. ;-) Welcome to Passions! I hope you like it here. As Always, Laura |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Balladeer: Thanks for the kind words, I hear a compliment from you is a great thing so Thanks a lot. Look forward to reading your poetry. Take careStartime: Thanks for reading mine since I read one of yours. Your words mean a lot to me. Snowpants: Awww. Im glad we have things in common, Amy says your a nice person so it must be true. Take care. Amy: Thanks sis! I love you girl. ParisGrl: Thanks Laura, glad you thought it was carefree and you liked the poem. TTYL...~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
There is magic in even the simplist things. Like this. Love the dancing tiger With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a timely reminder not to take the beauty around us for granted..thank you  |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
This poem that you have penned Lisa Comes from deep within your being To see the world in the way you do Truly is such a magical thing Wonderful job Lisa, and a perfect message! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Happy Birthday kiddo! You are a "magic" thing in my life!! Love you much sis... ~amy~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lisa, this is a wonderful piece of writing from you. You obviously have as much talent as your sister. (No I won't compare you, I know exactly how that feels ) I've got loads of sisters two older and three younger. Very well done, excellant workTake care Mushy Marsha Sorry I'm late replying to this, it slipped by me earlier. Oh and Happy Birthday Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Irie: Thanks, Im glad you liked my poem. Also happy for your sweet response. Kaile: Your welcome and Thanks dragonpoe: Glad you liked my dancing tiger and the poem. Aimster: Thanks again! Awww appricate the b-day message also! ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Marsha: Thanks for the kind words. Amy has told me about you and that you are also a good poet, look forward to seeing that for myself. Thanks for not comparing us. I had a nice b-day to. Take care.~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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