Open Poetry #11 |
Love Divine |
raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
Your damaged heart speaks to me Your pain has been made mine The tears you cry fall from my eyes In this love divine The sorrow you whispered softly goes by But the sound of the pain will never die The guilt that beats in your heart beats in mine There is so little distance between you and I You pray for an end I long for a start And it is only are ourselves we make fall apart Living in this lie of love divine Bitter regret that won’t heal with time Our souls we have shared now intertwined Tears fall in rivers washing away the lines Forming a landscape of our love divine The pain still so new the scars faded and old Nightmares come and some never go All that is yours you make it now mine And this we call a love divine [This message has been edited by raleighbttrfly (edited 12-13-2000).] |
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Rosalind Palafox
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I enjoyed reading your poem. This topic is something i haven't read in a while. Thanks for the read. "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This is so beautiful. Worlds apart but together in Love Divine. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
Thank you both for the time you took to read and reply. This pome is about a vary complex relationship and was truly writen from the heart. I'm glade you liked it. I am not always lonely even if I am always alone |
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