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Life Voyage
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Life Voyage |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Life voyage Shadows of ghosts, phantoms of pride Stalk within me and live inside. Scour synopsis of my brain Where serendipity rules reign. Through the abysmal I sail where Heaven has blacked the stars of braille. And sirens sing in constant sound Those are the pounding raves that pound. I am alone, within a zone Solitary, to every bone. And numb the skin that lays the core Enmeshed within this web of store. I'm haunted by the doldrums stay That beats no drum but torpid lay. A child lost the abyss of time My only thread the silk of rhyme. And I ring that bell loud and clear To clear away the smothering fear. The fear that ghosts each phantoms tide That grabs my sand to reach my pride. The shoal is there it does not hide Nor do I fear to be a bride. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, I really don't know were I would begin to pick a favorite line, you are trully awesome with the pen my friend, This is stunning a keeper for life. Thank you, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cerenity, I don't know where I'd begin to thank you for the read and beautiful comment. *L* Sy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
in silver light I would you cast hold tight then on to ship's great mast across the seas of thundrous wave cast to you the lines to save cause me worry, cause me fear in light of this, I shed a tear in silvered light I would you cast hold tight then on to this your mast Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, If I could accept your line Leave the boat or so incline. Then you would be in danger too And that I would never do. *L* |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a maginficant piece. Each line has such music! This is going in my library. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece with us. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Through the abysmal I sail where Heaven has blacked the stars of braille. And sirens sing in constant sound Those are the pounding raves that pound. =============== A child lost the abyss of time My only thread the silk of rhyme. And I ring that bell loud and clear To clear away the smothering fear. The fear that ghosts each phantoms tide That grabs my sand to reach my pride. The shoal is there it does not hide Nor do I fear to be a bride. =============== "Heaven has blacked the stars of braille." that is one of the COOLEST lines and images I have ever read...oh man!!! and this one ... "My only thread the silk of rhyme." and this whole verse...... "And I ring that bell loud and clear To clear away the smothering fear. The fear that ghosts each phantoms tide That grabs my sand to reach my pride." WAAAAAAY COOOOL ... and those ghosts and phantoms have some damn fine cadence as well . *winkiewinkie* stinkie dinkie *L* me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LoveBug, You are a love and I thank you. Janet Marie, Your raves make waves upon my heart They have you know from the very start. *L* Sy |
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