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Unconditional Love....
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Unconditional Love.... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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Some people say they love each other unconditionally But what they say is..."I love you...as long as you love me" True love that's unconditional will never have a pause Its boundaries are limitless and there's no hidden clause. There's love enough to go around for everyone on earth The unconditionality its only proof of worth Blessed be the soul who, once in life, can have love of that kind It is the greatest love there is but -oh, so hard to find! I love you unconditionally - if I'm with you or not For all the love I'm capable of giving you have got. There is no wrong that you can do - no sin you can commit To stop my heart from loving you and that's the truth of it. Perhaps you'll find another who will fit you like a glove But there will always be a place in my heart filled with love. For I love you for what you are....not what you are with me So if you're happy, I am, too.......love unconditionally. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!CLAPPING. This is so very true. I have loved and no matter what the outcome I love them still. This is so very perfect for true love once given is never taken back. *sigh* This poem of yours pleases this reader to no end. You have truly the gift for truth and such a talent for putting it into beautiful words. Thank you so very much for sharing it. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
So? Now whatta bout that Bud light man?....Balladeer......Yanno, I'll be looking for that book soon.....you really need to have one published....you could name it something original like: My Poetry....or, Balladeer, Part Time Moderator, Part Time Poet.....Or, how to stick it to a Toerag and still find time to write. Or, "Makin' Time To Make Some Rhymes....Or, "How I Made A Million Bucks Killin' Roaches and Writin' Poetry"...or, "These Poems of Mine, Mostly Rhyme, When They Don't it Ain't a Crime, It don't matter none to me, Got your money, Hee-hee-hee." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There is no wrong that you can do - no sin you can commit To stop my heart from loving you and that's the truth of it. ======================== For I love you for what you are....not what you are with me ====================== you are wiser than EVEN YOU know... and those lines above... those eloquent, amazing gifts of poetic grace... they are now engraved on my heart...and etched in gold... the only thing left to say is... 0hhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis.  and I do..I do later-unconditional-gator me |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Dear Janet Marie....you poor misled sweet dear, How can ya be so affectionate, to this silly old Balladeer? Have ya ever had the pleasure, of a Toerag round your feet?, Think of long pure ecstacy, and dreams so long and sweet. Balladeer's so silly, and ugly, fat and weird, you oughtta read my expert work, and forget that Balladeer. I could make ya famous, you'd forever love me dear, Then Balladeer could write again, bout love and pain and tears. (Ya see?...leave him, come to me, it would be a blessing to him and his writing?) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
would one love one, right or wrong? would one love one, without song? would one love one, all along? would one love one, treated wrong? You would treat All right, Sir of that, All can be sure... and that, our most dear Balladeer is tribute to one most sincere... Never should the Forums be without thee... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Startime...I'm SO glad you could relate to this. Thank you for a very wonderful reply  Toe...no book for a broken down bug catcher coming soon. Those are great titles, though! JanetMArie...if they are engraved in your heart, they are in a very special place.. Toe...I don't know if she ever had the pleasure of a Toerag around her feet but I know she stepped in dog doodoo once. Does that count? Sunshine...yes, I would give my all...to All. Thank you for coming by so late! No, I'll always be here [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 11-26-2000).] |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
as always a very well thought and rendered piece. by the way, would my old account have been wiped out? Jbowie |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful. I agree totally. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
'Deer, 'swonderful. I do believe a woman would give her soul unconditionally for such a love. Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great poem full of wonderful wisdom and unconditional love expressions....well thought out my friend and full of reality's truth about love...oh how so many pine for thet perfect one and bless them when they find it!!!!!!!ethome |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Balladeer, I really like this one Ball I do believe it is one of my favorites from you. It is so true and so wise. Thank you for sharing,~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is simply beautiful. It's a testimony that love IS unconditional! IT's the purest kind of love, and the poem is wonderful. No glove could fit more perfectly than the words in this one! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Weave_Watcher Junior Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 21 |
man this is very good. your words say what i feel for my love.Thxs for the reminder.Sometimes we let things get in the way of our unconditional love. THXs Agian! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Balladeer--this is wonderfully expressed and true...thank you for being you! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The world definitely needs more of this kind of love!! Great poem, Balladeer!! Denise |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Forever and ever amen...yes yes and yes...this is how love should be...and you have said it so well |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
(((( HUG ))))) |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Smile Michael ... your wonderful heart is showing. I really loved this ... it could only be written by someone who knows the truth in what they want and deserve in return. Beautiful sentiments, and so delicately woven, much appreciated this lovely piece my friend. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ What a beautiful piece of poetry. You touch tender in the most appealing ways. I'm pleased to know you - unconditionally. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Bal- such a beautiful and honest piece you have wove here. i stand in awe of your talent, from funny to romantic to charming to sentimental, you can write it ALL. i applaud you. great work. take care. ~amy~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
jbowie....WONDERFUL to see you around again. I'll find out... temptress...Thank you, my friend. I'm glad kethry...and so would a man. Thank you, sweet person ethome...yes, we pine for it but many wind up with sons of birches!  I appreciate your words very much rosepetals...and thank you for being there to let me share it with... Irish Rose...I'm so glad you agree...unconditionally. weave watcher...if that's the way you feel about your love, then I congratulate both of you! Martie....and thank you VERY much for liking the me that I am Denise...I agree....and WE need more of YOU!!! Paula...I thank you for agreeing Doreen....a hug from you is always special! Kit...and your beautiful comments are also very appreciated. Thank you Marge....you're pleased? I'm TICKLED PINK!! You are a wonderful friend....extremely unconditionally Amy...I write it ALL...for you and your approval is ALL to me. Thank you, person I am very happy to call friend. [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 11-26-2000).] |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Balladeer-You touched my heart with this one. To have this perfect of a love which transcends all else. Wonderfully written, may I add that I also pray every night for this person that he is kept safe. I feel the feelings you wrote here. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You stole those last two verses from my heart. *S* Granted, you've prettied them up and given them sublime rhyme... but I still recognize them! LOL |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Balladeer~ You must have women throw themselves at you on a daily basis.....you are amazing........I loved this. -SEA |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Balladeer, I just wanted to let you know how I truly enjoyed this read tonite... As a matter of fact I come here now to thread to my library for tomorrows I may continue to browse... Coco |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh boy oh boy, I did it again I 4got to hit that button 2 thread... So, I pop rite back and shall now clic that button to library Sorri |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
what a great positive message and it is rare. In fact does it even exist? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The message so well presented, and it's true, unconditional love is very rare. A great poem from the best Liz |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Ball’, This touches the inner soul. One day, over 30 years ago, when I said, “I love you”, and I really meant it, scared me to death. Melton |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It is the ONLY way to love....... |
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