Open Poetry #11 |
What You've Done For Me |
snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
You ask me, my Friend, What I will take with me When we go our separate ways; Choose our separate paths. My whole life has been changed; You've taken the despair and sorrow And turned them completely around. Now lies hope, Now lies complacence in my soul. You've taken this heart And show it the love That it has so much needed, But so much lacked. There are no worries; There are no problems When I am with you. You provide me with such serenity That, even in a state of chaos, If I am by your side, This peace of mind will never be taken. Nothing in my life will be the same Now that I’ve met you. You've shown me that My heart is worth loving; My life still has meaning, No matter how hard I have to try to discover it. And just like the dawn, You broke away the darkness From a soul that couldn't make it much longer. You saw the pain; You understood the hurt. And you did your best To save my heart from falling. All I can say is thank you for the love That this life never imagined possible And I will never forget you As long as I draw breath from the air. I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a gift you have received... ...renewal... 'tis a wondrous thing |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yes, it is! Thanks, Sunshine!! I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Very lovely writing, I enjoyed the read. Love and light, Richard |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
May I simply say WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! and leave it at that. This was beautiful my friend. Truely pure and from the heart. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was beautiful. What a lovely way to say Thank-you. -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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