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snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
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0 posted 2000-12-28 08:15 PM


You ask me, my Friend,
What I will take with me
When we go our separate ways;
Choose our separate paths.
My whole life has been changed;
You've taken the despair and sorrow
And turned them completely around.
Now lies hope,
Now lies complacence in my soul.
You've taken this heart
And show it the love
That it has so much needed,
But so much lacked.
There are no worries;
There are no problems
When I am with you.
You provide me with such serenity
That, even in a state of chaos,
If I am by your side,
This peace of mind will never be taken.
Nothing in my life will be the same
Now that I’ve met you.
You've shown me that
My heart is worth loving;
My life still has meaning,
No matter how hard I have to try to discover it.
And just like the dawn,
You broke away the darkness
From a soul that couldn't make it much longer.
You saw the pain;
You understood the hurt.
And you did your best
To save my heart from falling.
All I can say is thank you for the love
That this life never imagined possible
And I will never forget you
As long as I draw breath from the air.


I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-12-28 08:33 PM


What a gift you have received...
...renewal...
'tis a wondrous thing

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
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2 posted 2000-12-28 10:10 PM


Yes, it is!  Thanks, Sunshine!!  

I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
3 posted 2000-12-28 10:15 PM


Very lovely writing, I enjoyed the read.
Love and light,
Richard

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-12-28 10:58 PM


May I simply say WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! and leave it at that.  This was beautiful my friend.  Truely pure and from the heart.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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kitkat
Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
5 posted 2000-12-29 10:52 AM


This was beautiful. What a lovely way to say Thank-you.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King



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