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Whispered Breath, Loves Sign
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Whispered Breath, Loves Sign |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Whispered Breath, Loves Sign Whispered breath strokes my sensitive ears Lifting your chest to graze my alabaster breast Taking mere seconds and then lasting years Making a torture of this respite of this soft rest Grazing in wonder my love overflows in tears Your laughter echoes within your teasing chest Touches that tantalise and hands that tease You lead and I follow in this lovers kiss chase The fires of desire lie quiet as we take our ease My love I know you want to speed up the pace Your heat translates to me and I whisper please Flames that were slumbering, leap and then race Desire flares as heat sparks from you to me Tasting the intoxicating wine in your loves kiss I'm drunk on your kisses and who wouldn't be With flames leaping between us at just a kiss Is this the reality of loves fire, loves mystery My heart is aflame and it's your touch I miss Reason is lost when your heart touches mine And sense seems to play no part of love at all It isn't sane to lose all track of space and time But my body, my spirit respond to your siren call Worlds could collide and I'd think life was fine You only had to touch me and you knew I'd fall My soul couldn't hide she recongnized loves sign Marsha  [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
And what did that sign say?? Perhaps that "this is an excellent poem!"  ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven, thank you most kindly. I was really unsure about this one, so I'm pleased that you like it. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Now this is the Slushy, Mushy, Marsha that I know and love. Write on Keth Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry, well you knew I wouldn't be without a mushy one for long. Glad you like it love. Take care Slushy Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Glad I didn't miss this one...{~,^} |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, thank you some of my older ones coming back to haunt me love. I know I wrote it, but it seems awfully long ago. Well last year as it is now 2001. Happy New Year love Take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Marsha! Beautiful sentiments filled with words of passion burning deeply throughout these lines. I loved "my soul couldn't hide" excellent wording, much enjoyed! Best wishes for a Happy New Year! /Kit |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful and passionate words my friend. This makes about 4 in a row I have read that I would put in the "elite" class of writing. Your growth was no accident as you stated and this proves it. Superb penning and excellent flow all mixed with a deep deep burning of desire. I loved this one and it goes into my library. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Here you go again...Filling up my shelves with your precious work... Every one gets better I do believe...Hope you never lose this side of you..You so always make me smile and feel those "warm-fuzzies"...hehe...Hugs...~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kit love, thank you so very much, you know how much I appreciate you don't you. Thank you is such a simple phrase but know it comes from within my heart Take care Mushy Mark my friend, I thank you again, I do appreciate your comments, I find it very difficult to see any change in my work at all. I honestly do. I know we are all a little blind about our work. And maybe me more than most. Anyway thank you so much you know I have always been in awe of your writing, and I do think you have excellant taste and style. Please know that I do really value your opinion, even if I cannot bring myself to admit it is really merrited Take care Mushy LL, thank you poppet, isn't it good that they don't limit our libraries, mine would have collapsed long ago if they did. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Lovely writing as always lady. I loved it. So soft and romantic. ~~ big sigh~~ Love and light, Richard |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Richard love, thank you muchly. Kari's been bringing some of my older ones forward. And I thank her for it. Thank you too take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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