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Can You Feel It?
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Can You Feel It? |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Can You Feel It? Can you feel the magic that flows through the air tonight? Can't you touch the enchantment that fills me with delight? If you open your eyes you can see the stars sparkle in me Oh how delectably this amazing night has turned out to be For when I looked at you I could see loves tender and soft glow Your face has betrayed you I can see the love that you don't show Can you feel the thrill that runs through my hand to you? Can't you smell the aroma of a desire and love that is true? I know that my love burns here within my soul and heart For love called out my name and commanded heat to start You didn't need to say anything special you just smiled at me And I knew deep within my spirit that this was meant to be Can you read the message that echoes in my loving embrace? Can't you unlock the mystery of love shining from my face? I can feel her inside, she singing Glorias and smiling in glee For wonder of wonders I know that you are in love with me I don't need the words I can read all those signs they're clear And loneliness and mistrust can just up and totally disappear Can you reach out with your senses and feel this electricity? Can't you feel loves power as it passes through you and me? The heat is amazing and these flames burn with heated bliss Which turns into a furnace whenever our lips meet in a kiss Don't you think it's delicious to discover finally a perfect love? It's almost as if you're a Christmas present sent from up above Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Marsha I don't know about the perfect love thing...but I'm ready to taste! Great poem! |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Wow I liked this alot. You always write some good stuff. Dear friend. Love and light, Richard |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey, I agree with passing shadows about the perfect love...nice dream though. And nice write too...and I definitely feel loves power! jwesley |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Marsha: This poem made me smile. I felt the power inside it that's for sure! You can tell that your happy. Hope you have a bright, wonderful future with this person! Take care. ~Lisa~  ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I don't know that there is a real perfect love but I will keep searching for the one as close to it as I can get. Wonderful write my friend. Hope your holiday is filled with plenty of chuckles and love. Merry Christmas!!!! A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Marsha~ Such a lovely song of the heart. You're dancing with delight across the pages of Passions. Merry Christmas to you, gal ! I'm glad to have the gift of you here in my heart. Love n' hugs ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
P S, thank you muchly, and I'm sure you'll enjoy the taste of it  And I believe in love, perfect or otherwise. As my sisters say whenever they are trying to convince me that they world isn't as wonderful as I see it. 'Oh Marsha, give it up girl!' But I won't because everyone needs dreams Take care Happy Christmas Mushy Richard, thank you, a wow for me really! I'm flattered, I truly am Have a great Christmas break Take care Mushy Marsha Jimmy love, thanks kid I'm sure you can!! It's pretty powerful when all's said and done. Thank you muchly Merry Christmas Take care Mushy  Lisa, thank you love, thank you muchly. I always think that it's far easier to look for the sun in things. Take care Happy Christmas Mushy ;D Mark my dear friend, and when you find it, because you will, I hope it brings you as much delight as you deserve. And as much delight as I've found. Thank you kindly, your replies always make me smile, and I'm sure that I can find lots of giggles and love. And the same to you too, I'm sure you will. Particularly if you will go around with a bunch of kissletoe Have fun love, after all it is the season of good will. Have a fantasic wonderful Christmas Take care Mushy Margie girl, Thank you so muchly, although it should be I who is thanking you. Which I do every day. I can't imagine my life without Passions pretty perfect poetical poets. Quick I'll take that bed in the alliteration clinic now  I could do with a lie down.Have a great Christmas and enjoy love and life, which I know you do. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful, boundless, bountiful, barage of poetic images of romance that you have put down on paper and it's outstanding.... love it so much!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
P T, thank you love, alliteration help needed for both of us then love! It's because of this Passions plague that's going about. Much like Sven's and Kethry's 'pox' but a little worse Take care Mushy Have a fabulous time Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Marsha: Your welcome for my reply. I'm sure I would like the taste of it. Happy New Years! Take care. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marsha, This is beautiful. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Never too late to unwrap presents such as this! Well done!... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lisa, thank you very much sweetie, and I very much appreciate it. Particually today. Take care Mushy Gemini, thank you love that is really sweet of you, I know that I couldn't live without my Passionate friends. Take care Mushy Kari love, thank you always  Take care Squishy Squashy Slishy Sloshy Slushy Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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