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Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2000-12-22 08:02 PM

Can You Feel It?

Can you feel the magic that flows through the air tonight?
Can't you touch the enchantment that fills me with delight?
If you open your eyes you can see the stars sparkle in me
Oh how delectably this amazing night has turned out to be
For when I looked at you I could see loves tender and soft glow
Your face has betrayed you I can see the love that you don't show

Can you feel the thrill that runs through my hand to you?
Can't you smell the aroma of a desire and love that is true?
I know that my love burns here within my soul and heart
For love called out my name and commanded heat to start
You didn't need to say anything special you just smiled at me
And I knew deep within my spirit that this was meant to be

Can you read the message that echoes in my loving embrace?
Can't you unlock the mystery of love shining from my face?
I can feel her inside, she singing Glorias and smiling in glee
For wonder of wonders I know that you are in love with me
I don't need the words I can read all those signs they're clear
And loneliness and mistrust can just up and totally disappear

Can you reach out with your senses and feel this electricity?
Can't you feel loves power as it passes through you and me?
The heat is amazing and these flames burn with heated bliss
Which turns into a furnace whenever our lips meet in a kiss
Don't you think it's delicious to discover finally a perfect love?
It's almost as if you're a Christmas present sent from up above

Marsha

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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1 posted 2000-12-22 08:09 PM

Marsha I don't know about the perfect love thing...but I'm ready to taste! Great poem!

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

2 posted 2000-12-22 08:12 PM

Wow I liked this alot. You always write some good stuff. Dear friend.
Love and light,
Richard

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2000-12-22 08:42 PM

Hey, I agree with passing shadows about the perfect love...nice dream though. And nice write too...and I definitely feel loves power!

jwesley

SwEeTnSeXy18
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

4 posted 2000-12-23 01:30 AM

Marsha:

This poem made me smile. I felt the power inside it that's for sure! You can tell that your happy. Hope you have a bright, wonderful future with this person! Take care.

~Lisa~

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2000-12-23 01:58 AM

I don't know that there is a real perfect love but I will keep searching for the one as close to it as I can get. Wonderful write my friend. Hope your holiday is filled with plenty of chuckles and love. Merry Christmas!!!!

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2000-12-23 04:15 AM

Oh, Marsha~
Such a lovely song of the heart.
You're dancing with delight across the pages of Passions.

Merry Christmas to you, gal !
I'm glad to have the gift of you here in my heart.
Love n' hugs
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2000-12-23 07:51 AM

P S, thank you muchly, and I'm sure you'll enjoy the taste of it

And I believe in love, perfect or otherwise. As my sisters say whenever they are trying to convince me that they world isn't as wonderful as I see it. 'Oh Marsha, give it up girl!' But I won't because everyone needs dreams

Take care
           Happy Christmas
               Mushy

Richard, thank you, a wow for me really! I'm flattered, I truly am
Have a great Christmas break

Take care
Mushy Marsha

Jimmy love, thanks kid

I'm sure you can!! It's pretty powerful when all's said and done. Thank you muchly

          Merry Christmas
Take care
                 Mushy

Lisa, thank you love, thank you muchly. I always think that it's far easier to look for the sun in things.
Take care
               Happy Christmas
                   Mushy
                     ;D
Mark my dear friend, and when you find it, because you will, I hope it brings you as much delight as you deserve. And as much delight as I've found. Thank you kindly, your replies always make me smile, and I'm sure that I can find lots of giggles and love. And the same to you too, I'm sure you will.

Particularly if you will go around with a bunch of kissletoe

Have fun love, after all it is the season of good will.
Have a fantasic wonderful Christmas
Take care
Mushy

Margie girl, Thank you so muchly, although it should be I who is thanking you. Which I do every day. I can't imagine my life without Passions pretty perfect poetical poets.
Quick I'll take that bed in the alliteration clinic now

  I could do with a lie down.
Have a great Christmas and enjoy love and life, which I know you do.
Take care
                 Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2000-12-23 07:55 AM

Beautiful, boundless, bountiful, barage of poetic images of romance that you have put down on paper and it's outstanding.... love it so much!!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

9 posted 2000-12-23 07:04 PM

P T, thank you love, alliteration help needed for both of us then love!

It's because of this Passions plague that's going about. Much like Sven's and Kethry's 'pox' but a little worse
Take care
              Mushy
              Have a fabulous time

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

SwEeTnSeXy18
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

10 posted 2001-01-01 03:06 PM

Marsha:

Your welcome for my reply. I'm sure I would like the taste of it. Happy New Years! Take care.

~Lisa~

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

11 posted 2001-01-01 03:18 PM

Marsha, This is beautiful.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2001-01-01 03:24 PM

Never too late to unwrap presents such as this! Well done!...

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

13 posted 2001-01-01 04:47 PM

Lisa, thank you very much sweetie, and I very much appreciate it. Particually today.
Take care
Mushy

Gemini, thank you love that is really sweet of you, I know that I couldn't live without my Passionate friends.
Take care
Mushy

Kari love, thank you always

Take care
                Squishy Squashy
                Slishy Sloshy
                 Slushy Mushy
                    Marsha

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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