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SEA
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0 posted 2000-11-17 10:52 AM



Kisses fall like rain
I accept them all with love
and savor each one

~*~

Hugs to warm my heart
Hold me close, don't let me go
I need you tonight

~*~

Love by candle light
slow, gentle, hot and so sweet
you make my dreams, real

~SEA~


[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-17-2000).]

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Romy
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1 posted 2000-11-17 11:18 AM


Sea, these are great!  I especially liked the first one, very well said!
peppermint35
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2 posted 2000-11-17 11:58 AM


Mmmmmm, SEA, you are on a roll!!!   Love them all!!

Pepper
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3 posted 2000-11-17 03:50 PM



SEA-
   so beautiful...
   you're a natural with these, my friend.  
   love them.  

   hugs,
   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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Debbie~ thank you   Husband inspired  

P35~ thank you, so sweet to me  

Vicky~ thank you, so nice of you to say!!  

-SEA

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5 posted 2000-11-17 04:45 PM


Love all three of these.  Beautifully done.

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O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

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6 posted 2000-11-17 07:01 PM


Romance by the SEA
Experience unsurpassed
Elation's embrace

jwesley
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7 posted 2000-11-17 07:14 PM


I, too, love them all and have to say...am just a little jealous.

jwesley

Daniel J D
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8 posted 2000-11-17 10:42 PM


SEA,
Very beautiful, well done. I may try one of these one day.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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9 posted 2000-11-17 11:00 PM


i can't write those for the life of me. so i commend you on their being so lovely.
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10 posted 2000-11-18 09:20 AM


SEA~
These are simply lovely extensions of your heart.

Here upon the night
Falling phrases of your heart
Touching tender thoughts


~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2000-11-18 09:55 AM


very nice..i must say you seem to take to these forms like a duck to water
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PM~   thank you  

Nan~ Love it, thank you  

Jwesley~ thank you, jealous? Of what?  

DJD~ I bet you'd be great at this  

Marge~ that is so sweet, thank you  

AR~ thank you very much  

Kaile~ quack quack   thanks  

-SEA

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-18-2000).]

Kit McCallum
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13 posted 2000-11-18 10:57 AM


Beautiful, tender thoughts of love SEA ... each and every one. Very nicely penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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14 posted 2000-11-23 12:08 PM


i am glad i caught this one as well
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15 posted 2000-11-24 03:56 AM


You certainly have a talent for these! Love 'em!

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~ My Angel.


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16 posted 2000-11-24 04:29 AM


~SEA~
My fav

Hugs to warm my heart
Hold me close, don't let me go
I need you tonight

~HUGS~

~Tracie~



Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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17 posted 2000-11-25 01:00 PM


SEA.......beautiful my friend....Love these romantic Senryus


((hugs))
Charisma

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(smiles) Awwwwwww, such sweet love fills your words as always, sweet friend, may the magic of romance always sing and swoon in your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, these are breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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