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Open Poetry #11

The Ladys' Fate

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2000-11-25 02:02 PM

They tell the tale
Of the day she was born
How a unicorn danced
On the Keeps meadow green

And they say it was written
In the stars up above
That her love would come riding
Riding with the morning sun

And how from the East
A warrior brave and true
Would by love and loves luck
Conquer Unicorns Keep

All her life she'd been told
That this was her fate
Could this be the one
The stars had foretold?

Her hand on the gate
His horse all adance
He calls to her lonely heart
Open the Keep

Her eyes to the East
Her eyes on his face
His voice on her skin
Welcome me in

Slowly she lifts
The bar to the gate
She opens the Keep
To this warriors fate

He knees his horse forward
And now she sees
Its not just a horse
But a unicorn...

Horn broken and hidden
By his flowing black mane
And she rushes to touch him
And he kneels to her

The warrior dismounts
And hands the reins to the Lady
He looks in her eyes
And whispers to her

You know what to do
You know your fate
Make us whole make us one
Now you've opened the gate

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2000-11-25 02:09 PM

*sigh* such magic, such beauty and such love. This was a total joy to read and transported me to a magical kingdom. Thank you so very much for the read.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-11-25 02:20 PM

like I said before....you do these romantic fantasy weaves very well, and Im glad to see you adding to your collection...
love the unicorn influence...
wonderful Paua-gator..
keep them coming

take care girlie
jm

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2000-11-25 03:08 PM

*****CLAPPING*****

[This message has been edited by Snow (edited 11-25-2000).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-11-25 04:36 PM

Very nice Paula...James

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2000-11-25 04:47 PM

Paula, see your knight did something, mine couldn't catch a cold. I love this one, and who broke the unicorns horn, and why? Oh love you do these so well.
Take care
Mushy
You know I love this don't you, be cause I do. Wonderful writing.

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2000-11-26 02:10 AM

Startime...thanks I'm glad I could transport you to my fantasy

Janet...with you to encourage me who knows I may just write like this forever...LOL thank you girlie

Snow...I appreciate the applause

James...thanks sweet

Marsha...thanks you are always so generous in your comments...keep reading maybe you will find out abt the horn

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2000-11-26 06:32 AM

Aw Paula you're doing it to me again!! What happens now...............great writing there sweetheart...write on!!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

8 posted 2000-11-26 01:55 PM

Paula, see your knights are from the old school, you want a maiden rescued, or a dragon turned into cat meat, they're the ones. All mine seem to do is behave like clowns. Love this new line of yours love, it's really great story. And I what more! If you promise to keep me supplied with romatic knights, I'll keep rolling out the clown princes. Deal?

Take care
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

9 posted 2000-11-26 02:04 PM

ethome...I didnt do anything LOL...well for you I guess I will tell what happens next...NOT hahaha...hugs to you

Marsha...DEAL...I have one more I am posting right now...thank you

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

10 posted 2000-11-27 05:56 AM

You do these very well Paula, you weave magic with your words.

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

11 posted 2000-11-28 12:05 PM

EagleOne...having the inspiration of YOUR knight helps...thanks

Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

12 posted 2000-12-28 03:17 AM

Lovely write PoetLady...
And I thank you for this enjoyable read...
Coco

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-28-2000).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2000-12-28 04:37 PM

What a happy ending here, Paula. Now if we can transfer this to our lives, it would be so wonderful.
Beautiful writing.
Sandra

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

14 posted 2000-12-28 07:03 PM

I LIKED this paula...now add a moat, and a drawbridge, and a few flying monkeys? and you'd be telling my tale!

Truly lovely work here!

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

15 posted 2000-12-28 07:06 PM

Paula,
A very captivating tale of fantasy
A pleasure to read
Liz

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

16 posted 2000-12-28 07:10 PM

My Twin....
I see now that we also share a love for fantasy, and you weave this tale of love so very well..........I shall borrow Snow's graphics to applaud you, and also I wish you well in the coming New Year. Peace, my twin.....

Write on!
-<--<--{(@

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

17 posted 2000-12-28 11:26 PM

You sure do know how to weave a fantasy and make it seem real. I always did believe in Unicorns anyway. Very lovely read and so well thought out.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

18 posted 2000-12-30 02:53 AM

Coco...thank you sweet lady

Sandra...it will happen sweet friend...anyone as lovely as you will find love

WOOHOO Serenity...what no dragons? hehehe thank you

Lady Liz...thank you for reading...I appreciate you taking the time

Well hey there Twin of my heart...there are two more that go with this...makes more sense when you read all three LOL...Happry New Year to you darlin

Mark...thank you sir...and how can you NOT believe in unicorns? They are there...right there in the corner of your heart...

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