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Silent Tears |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
There is nothing sadder Than the sound Of silent tears Raining down |
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cougar04 New Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 5 |
The one element that I love about this poem is that it's so true. It is, in a way, an oxymoron "the sound of silent tears" small, but yet large |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
They may be silent but I can hear them I know where they come from....and they fall into the abyss of loneliness ...but the escape from there is easy if it's done on the wings of the dove of love....where the spirit soars once again in the wonderful stream of consciousness...where the great light fills the sky and the sound of children's voices sing where the rain of all injustice falls on the umbrella of indifference...take care... ethome |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula, this is such a perfect poem, your have written this beautifully. You have such a wonderful way with words, and I love this one. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
So very true! Take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Paula...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ You've said so much - in so little space. Lovely, lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula, what can I say but... you grieve, I grieve. *HuGS* Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ this is sad, painful and expressed so well......hugs sweetie  -SEA |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
A world of words, Paula, truly said and expressed, in so few. jwesley |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Paula, Well expressed, and I do agree. When the pain is so much and no one is around or understand, the silent tears hurt even more. I know the feeling. Cheers, my dear friend. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautifully done. I applaud. Minimalism at it's best!!! Excellent emotion....To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
cougar04...thank you...wasnt thinking about the oxymoron thing... ethome...I know you do sweet friend...and you're such a comfort to me...thank you Marsha...thank you sweet lady.. EagleOne...thanks guy James...thank you my friend...I appreciate your kind words Marge...thank you sweet lady Kethry...I appreciate this very much...hugs to you Sea...I appreciate the hugs...thanks jwesley...it doesnt always take a lot of words to say what you feel...thank you Daniel...Cheers to you as well dear one...thank you Dreamkeeper...thank you |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Paula-- this is both beautiful and heartfelt. an honest relection of tears and emotion. truly liked this! take care. ~amy~ |
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The Poetic Plumber Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 38 |
The poem is short and masterful. Wonderful job. Roger |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Amy...thank you Im glad you liked it Roger...why thank you mister plumber man... Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PAULA, this is a heart tugger and in so few words yet soooooooo well expressed dear lady... Coco |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
'tis a cruel sound indeed |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Coco...thank you...sometimes its better said with just a word EagleScorpion...Cruel? Yes I suppose...sadder still to think you can cry and theres no one there to hear |
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