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An incomplete invitation...
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An incomplete invitation... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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hey you standing out there why don't you please come near so we could have this dance and burn the midnight oil under the bright night sheets of glowing full-moon skies under the shimmering reflections from a sweet butterfly-winged cloud, in unabashed freedom in unmasked gladness let's have this dance, my dear please take those steps, come near remember that warm night when we spend joyful time in each other's fond arms when thoughts fought a battle whether to kiss or not -- we did, and we still do with as much love as ever so please come near, my dear let's dance into the night under moonlight shadows let's dance and later fly into the arms of night join me in this love dance ...... ...... |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Here I am!!! Let's dance baby!!  Fantastic poem Sudhir lyer!!  -SEA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
in unabashed freedom in unmasked gladness now that's a warm night ...of dancing I liked ~Wynter undone *w "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, what a completely HAPPY poem! You've got my feet tapping now! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I say the entire world should hold a dance! I loved this, Sudhir. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Such a pleasantly HAPPY poem needs to be revisited.... BTTT Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
A dance of love such a request could not be turned down. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I think I can hear the music to this!!! Lovely write Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
SEA~ That's so graceful... and kind of you... thanks... nakdthoughts, thanks for coming by... glad that you liked Karilea, my friend, thank you so very much (and make that twice as much too...) Kathleen, absolutely like your thoughts... thanks... inot2B, thanks for sharing that sentiment and for reading... pepper~, I am honoured that you can hear music to this.... thanks... regards to all, sudhir |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the title pulled me in and im glad it did... these lines gave me a smile...i liked the way you put these sentiments across when thoughts fought a battle whether to kiss or not- |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Sudhir--You dance so well, sweet man...and I'm sure she will..into the night, with you. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Sud* You dance devinely!! Loved those butterfly clouds my friend Only you can weave like this....I've been missing your work and plan to do some major catching up tonight...excellent writing~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
kaile, I am glad, that you did visit this one, too.... thank a great deal Martie, Thanks so much for your kind words, as always... Butterflies~, I am glad that you liked the butterfly cloud... I hope that you haev done some catching up... now rest a while, my friend...  Regards to all, Sudhir |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful dance....loved and enjoyed reading it. Charisma |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
remember that warm night when we spend joyful time in each other's fond arms when thoughts fought a battle whether to kiss or not -- FRed Astire beware, wonderful piece Sudhir. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sudhir you are writing up a romance storm with the love poems you write these days! The quality of the writing is excellent as is indicated by this very one! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you, Charisma... glad that you enjoyed it... brian, you are a flatterer, my friend... and a good one too... thanks... ethome, that's a lot of praise... thanks for all your words... regards to all, sudhir |
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