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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-01-03 08:05 PM


           The message

I sent you a message
you did not retrieve
I think you ignore me
it's what I believe

well you go on chewing
your pie in the sky
I am now laughing
no need for reply

another time you will see me
my attention try to get
but you play games
and I think that I'm all set

you flirt and you taunt
you are such a big tease
the message I sent back to you
was no thank you please

I'm not sorry
it's not the message you thought
you are just a pretender
and I think now your caught



© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-01-03 08:19 PM


It's always been a wonder to me...the minute you thinK you open the lines of communication? They suddenly close.

H? I relate to this one very well...

(spelling correction, lol...note the K...)

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 01-03-2001).]

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2001-01-03 08:23 PM


Well that'll teach'em...can't be fooled thateasy...good poem..I enjoyed it very much!
spiked
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
3 posted 2001-01-04 01:04 AM


"Message in  a bottle"  I like much.
Rich

EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
4 posted 2001-01-04 01:10 AM


This man you dislike sounds like a big dork!
Sorry this man had to bother you so..

LOVE IS GOD, LOVE IS WAR, LOVE IS WHAT YOUR LIFE IS FOR.

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